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Gentle River

The river ripples as it flows over small stones Swirling gently against its bank Resting quietly under the heat of the summer Sun Shimmering as it lays dreaming Shots of silver in random patterns come and go As fish dance across its surface For the contest By Linda Rutherford

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/22/2016 2:07:00 PM
This deserves a cheerful congratulations!
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Date: 2/21/2016 10:47:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this wonderful monoku Linda..
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Date: 2/21/2016 9:03:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL!!Congratulations on your “River of Dreams” win , Linda! Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/21/2016 7:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Nicely done.
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Date: 2/21/2016 10:24:00 AM
Three lines with shadows under them. Cool way to do it!!! I like it a lot!
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Date: 2/21/2016 10:12:00 AM
Linda, Congratulations on your flowing win. Enjoyed the imagery. Stop by my latest blog "Oh Beautiful Dreams" if you'd like. Enjoy your wonderful win and day. ~LINDA~
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