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Gentle Fall

Expanding colors Dangle helpless upon trees Waiting to float free

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/2/2009 1:20:00 AM
The wafting of leaves is a sight to see. I love to stand and observe such natural sights...Raul
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Date: 8/23/2009 7:17:00 PM
Beautifuly images of the coming fall season, Cecil. I'm looking forward to autumn. It must be quite beautiful in your area. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/22/2009 7:57:00 AM
Nice use of imagery and personification for an interesting view. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing!!!!!!! Karen
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Date: 8/21/2009 2:16:00 PM
Excellent imagery here Cecil, just breathless! ~Trudy~
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Date: 8/21/2009 10:02:00 AM
Here we are at the end of the week again. I am reading some excellent poetry today. Thank you for sharing yours with us Cecil. Best of luck in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/21/2009 8:35:00 AM
very nice, waiting to float free, interesting idea
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Date: 8/21/2009 2:27:00 AM
Great Haiku , Cecil . Early Autumn , well captured ...
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Date: 8/21/2009 1:26:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Cecil.Rgds Brian
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Date: 8/21/2009 12:43:00 AM
Love this Haiku. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/20/2009 8:04:00 PM
mmmm!!! cool enigma! Cecil!...the title pulls it off nicely! well done! jmg
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