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Gentle Fall

Expanding colors
Dangle helpless upon trees
Waiting to float free

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Raul Moreno

September 2, 2009 at 1:20 AM

The wafting of leaves is a sight to see. I love to stand and observe such natural sights...Raul

Carolyn Devonshire

August 23, 2009 at 7:17 PM

Beautifuly images of the coming fall season, Cecil. I'm looking forward to autumn. It must be quite beautiful in your area. Love, Carolyn

August 22, 2009 at 7:57 AM

Nice use of imagery and personification for an interesting view. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing!!!!!!! Karen

Trudy Diane Rider

August 21, 2009 at 2:16 PM

Excellent imagery here Cecil, just breathless! ~Trudy~

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 21, 2009 at 10:02 AM

Here we are at the end of the week again. I am reading some excellent poetry today. Thank you for sharing yours with us Cecil. Best of luck in the contest. Love, Carol