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Gentle Breeze

witnessing dream images rise and subside 
within hidden passageways of mind now surfacing
nonchalant eye smiles enjoying the joy ride

mindful presence celebrating aliveness glides
in and out of hearts desires now manifesting
witnessing dream images rise and subside 

ego borne cravings of lower mind take us aside
beseeching our indulgence amidst illusions spiralling
nonchalant eye smiles enjoying the joy ride

mode non-judgmental, no thought we deride
as we embrace and release without stagnating
witnessing dream images rise and subside 

fearless and desireless, God inside, divine beside
lower mind vaporised, gently soul thus flowing
nonchalant eye smiles enjoying the joy ride

vibrant emptiness bliss vivified, minds not low tide
all destined doings done although we do nothing 
witnessing dream images rise and subside 
nonchalant eye smiles enjoying the joy ride

23-April-2021
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Hankins Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 10:00 AM
Beautiful villanelle, Unseeking Seeker. One of my favorite poetry forms, and you have done a magnificent job!
Seeker Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 8:02 PM
Thanks Milton!
Buhagiar Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 5:43 AM
A beautiful poem. Hope you'll visit my garden.
Seeker Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 6:13 AM
the fragrance of your garden melds with magnetism of the breeze!
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