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witnessing dream images rise and subside within hidden passageways of mind now surfacing nonchalant eye smiles enjoying the joy ride mindful presence celebrating aliveness glides in and out of hearts desires now manifesting witnessing dream images rise and subside ego borne cravings of lower mind take us aside beseeching our indulgence amidst illusions spiralling nonchalant eye smiles enjoying the joy ride mode non-judgmental, no thought we deride as we embrace and release without stagnating witnessing dream images rise and subside fearless and desireless, God inside, divine beside lower mind vaporised, gently soul thus flowing nonchalant eye smiles enjoying the joy ride vibrant emptiness bliss vivified, minds not low tide all destined doings done although we do nothing witnessing dream images rise and subside nonchalant eye smiles enjoying the joy ride 23-April-2021

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Date: 4/23/2021 10:00:00 AM
Beautiful villanelle, Unseeking Seeker. One of my favorite poetry forms, and you have done a magnificent job!
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Date: 4/23/2021 8:02:00 PM
Thanks Milton!
Date: 4/23/2021 5:43:00 AM
A beautiful poem. Hope you'll visit my garden.
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Date: 4/23/2021 6:13:00 AM
the fragrance of your garden melds with magnetism of the breeze!

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