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It is hard to sit and just be silent that is let the mind rest..Sara

Observe the wonders as they occur around you. Don't claim them. Feel the artistry moving through and be silent. Rumi Fog came in its gentility Sun in predictability Cast its radiant light The sun's sustainability Touched damp fog's great fragility With its powerful might Sponsor:Nette Onclaud] Contest: Rumi In RimuCouee Written by: Sara Kendrick

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/11/2012 8:36:00 PM

This is wonderful, Sara. How did I ever miss it? and I see you won in the contest too. Congratulations to you.

Kash Poet

Date: 5/10/2012 7:23:00 PM

A profound write from you Sara.Congratulations on your win in the contest.

Deborah Burch

Date: 5/10/2012 7:04:00 PM

Congratulations Sara on your win!! Well Done! hugs, love ya , deb

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 5/10/2012 12:54:00 PM

Congratulations Sara for this wonderful piece...I love your rhymes...Thumb up for you....

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/10/2012 10:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Rumi In Rime Couee" contest Sara. Love, Carol

Dinda Minardi

Date: 5/10/2012 8:32:00 AM

Congrats Sara for the placement! This poem has revealed morning routine, beautiful and the rhyme had captured me :)

Dinda Minardi

Date: 5/10/2012 8:32:00 AM

I forgot to rate! :)

David Williams

Date: 5/10/2012 7:32:00 AM

Sara congrats on your win..David

Joseph May

Date: 5/10/2012 5:28:00 AM

congrats on your win Sara..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/10/2012 2:30:00 AM

great study in contrast, sara.. warm cheers to you for placing in my contest..:) huggs!

Maureen Lefanue

Date: 5/3/2012 2:21:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed my poem, Sara. This is truly beautiful poem. I wish you all the bestin Nette's contest. Love, Maureen

Don Johnson

Date: 5/1/2012 8:07:00 PM

love it love it lubbit... great poetry babe....

Jack Horne

Date: 4/30/2012 1:45:00 PM

i love fog and can almost be there, watching this one - a sure winner

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 4/30/2012 6:54:00 AM

This ones a beauty, Sara! It feels as though you walk on quiet feet to not disturb the peaceful calm and tranquility. A lovely write! Best wishes, Mikki

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/28/2012 5:45:00 PM

This is a beautiful write, simply beautiful write my friend! I love all the references to the sun and fog, in a way fine contrasting elements of nature! My favorite line has to be, "Touched damp fog's great fragility" where it shows the mortality of this fogs life span for that morning(if it is morning)! I really enjoyed this poem that I have read this evening! I love this write immensely! Excellent Work!!

Laila Andresen Mjelde

Date: 4/28/2012 1:57:00 PM

Great penning, Sara! So true, not to claim, do observe and learn! Loved reading this, as always! oxox always Laila

John Rhinem

Date: 4/28/2012 7:59:00 AM

Smile ˜ "Lay upon your bed and be still; know, that I Am God." ˜ If my finger shall ever point unto anything glorious and wonderful amid Creation and or this life then let it, My Beautiful Father In Heaven, that this tiny finger points unto. * Love the poe my dear, beautiful Sara ˜ My love always, John!:) ˜

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 4/28/2012 7:48:00 AM

The imagery is wonderful..love this rhyme..INK-U-SCRIPT