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It is hard to sit and just be silent that is let the mind rest..Sara

Gentility

Observe the wonders as they occur around you. Don't claim them. Feel the artistry moving through and be silent.  Rumi

 Fog came in its gentility
Sun in predictability
Cast its radiant light
The sun's sustainability
Touched damp fog's great fragility
With its powerful might

Sponsor:Nette Onclaud]
Contest: Rumi In RimuCouee
Written by: Sara Kendrick

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Andrea Dietrich

May 11, 2012 at 8:36 PM

This is wonderful, Sara. How did I ever miss it? and I see you won in the contest too. Congratulations to you.

Kash Poet

May 10, 2012 at 7:23 PM

A profound write from you Sara.Congratulations on your win in the contest.

Deborah Burch

May 10, 2012 at 7:04 PM

Congratulations Sara on your win!! Well Done! hugs, love ya , deb

Olusegun Arowolo

May 10, 2012 at 12:54 PM

Congratulations Sara for this wonderful piece...I love your rhymes...Thumb up for you....

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 10, 2012 at 10:57 AM

Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Rumi In Rime Couee" contest Sara. Love, Carol

Dinda Minardi

May 10, 2012 at 8:32 AM

I forgot to rate! :)

Dinda Minardi

May 10, 2012 at 8:32 AM

Congrats Sara for the placement! This poem has revealed morning routine, beautiful and the rhyme had captured me :)

David Williams

May 10, 2012 at 7:32 AM

Sara congrats on your win..David

Joseph May

May 10, 2012 at 5:28 AM

congrats on your win Sara..

Nette Onclaud

May 10, 2012 at 2:30 AM

great study in contrast, sara.. warm cheers to you for placing in my contest..:) huggs!

Maureen Lefanue

May 3, 2012 at 2:21 AM

Glad you enjoyed my poem, Sara. This is truly beautiful poem. I wish you all the bestin Nette's contest. Love, Maureen

Don Johnson

May 1, 2012 at 8:07 PM

love it love it lubbit... great poetry babe....

Jack Horne

April 30, 2012 at 1:45 PM

i love fog and can almost be there, watching this one - a sure winner

Michelle Mac Donald

April 30, 2012 at 6:54 AM

This ones a beauty, Sara! It feels as though you walk on quiet feet to not disturb the peaceful calm and tranquility. A lovely write! Best wishes, Mikki

Russell Sivey

April 28, 2012 at 5:45 PM

This is a beautiful write, simply beautiful write my friend! I love all the references to the sun and fog, in a way fine contrasting elements of nature! My favorite line has to be, "Touched damp fog's great fragility" where it shows the mortality of this fogs life span for that morning(if it is morning)! I really enjoyed this poem that I have read this evening! I love this write immensely! Excellent Work!!

Laila Andresen Mjelde

April 28, 2012 at 1:57 PM

Great penning, Sara! So true, not to claim, do observe and learn! Loved reading this, as always! oxox always Laila

John Rhinem

April 28, 2012 at 7:59 AM

Smile ˜ "Lay upon your bed and be still; know, that I Am God." ˜ If my finger shall ever point unto anything glorious and wonderful amid Creation and or this life then let it, My Beautiful Father In Heaven, that this tiny finger points unto. * Love the poe my dear, beautiful Sara ˜ My love always, John!:) ˜