Genesis

Cosmos’ creation

          Light’s rapture

                  God’s breathe:

                                      LIFE!  



© Demetrios Trifiatis
  08 DECEMBER 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mcdaid Avatar
December 13, 2014 at 10:26 AM
powerful picture painted demotrios excellent pen pal
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December 13, 2014 at 12:23 PM
You are so gracious my dear friend, Liam. Thank you so much.
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December 9, 2014 at 8:11 AM
What man thinks is impossible God spoke into existance. I enjoyed this tribute to His magnificence!
Trifiatis Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 10:31 AM
Yes, Richard, impossible is not in God's vocabulary! Thank you for visiting and commenting!
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December 9, 2014 at 7:22 AM
Light’s rapture yes yes after the big bang " tamosa maa jyotirgamaya" "Let there be light" "radiance of a thousand suns were to burst...." that was it. After that the universe was formed and earth. Life came after billion years.. amoeba--Homo sapiens..God is so majestic.Love Demetrios ....rajat
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December 9, 2014 at 10:32 AM
Thank you my friend, Rajat, for your always valuable mini lectures and for your visit and comment!
Roper Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 6:11 PM
Wonderful write, Demetrios, God's creation. Blessings eve
Horsman Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 10:31 AM
In the Beginning there was poetry, yours Demetrios... love your creation also..
Trifiatis Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 12:36 PM
How wonderful to receive your visit and comment , dear Harry, thank you!
Chircop Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 9:01 AM
Amen,amen to this gem.God is indeed the beginning and the end.Every breath We breathe is His breath breezing in our lungs.Awesome Demi By the way,my cousin had a baby boy in Octber and his name is Demi. : )
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December 8, 2014 at 12:59 PM
Another Demetrios, another , "son of mother earth!" how delightful. I wish him health and happiness all life long! Thank you for your enchanting visit dear, Charmaine!
A. Sharma Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 6:52 AM
I see truth in your words always Demetrios my friend! So true so wonderful!
Trifiatis Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 12:43 PM
Thank you for your kind visit and comment, Dr. Upma. Greatly appreciated!
Andresen Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 6:39 AM
- Beautifully written and truth in your words dear Demetrios ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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December 8, 2014 at 12:48 PM
Thank you my friend, Anne-Lise, for your gracious comment!
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December 8, 2014 at 4:31 AM
Hello Demetrios! Wow! Beautiful pen! I truly enjoyed it my dear friend. A 7 for you! Have a very lovely week! :) Love and hugs! xxxxxx D.
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December 8, 2014 at 12:53 PM
What a marvelous visit and comment, dear Dorian! Thank you so much! Love!
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