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Gem's Lament

broken strings on your guitar no longer get repaired and rough songs lay scattered 'cross your room you're not here where lattes where cappuccinos meshed with your tales of soul, of sex and reparations your dream came by today a thirst for those stories that brought us joy that brought us tears clinging to their faces

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Date: 7/5/2023 5:55:00 PM
A profoundly introspective portrayal of exquisitely melancholic sentiments, Richy exploration of loss and desolation delves into the depths of human experience. Congratulations on your win
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Ricky Muse
Date: 7/5/2023 6:42:00 PM
Thank you my friend.
Date: 2/24/2018 12:08:00 PM
A deeply intimate portrayal of beautifully sad emotions Richard of loss and despair.. This gem laments in a rich and personal way. Gorgeous poetry.
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Ricky Muse
Date: 3/10/2018 7:31:00 AM
Thanks Susan. Ever notice how a poem has a tendency not to cooperate? This poem was like that, like a child.
Date: 9/15/2017 8:45:00 PM
I have read this piece with my heart.
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Ricky Muse
Date: 9/16/2017 5:16:00 PM
Thanks Pat. I know it doesn't look like it, but this is one of the most personal poems I've ever written.

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