06/23/24
Gemini Garden, Silent One
Third place
Contest by Ink Empress
" Birds care not for whom they sing " - Silent One. Birds care not for whom they sing, but sing free in zest and zing, whistles calling mates to bring too close in the season Spring. Poets care not for whom they write : Emotive urges excite. Dreams and facts always fight, but feelings give appetite. Songs of birds : spontaneous , in cheers, simultaneous. and sometimes monotonous, also in cadence, joyous. Poem sprouts from poet's heart Sweet tweets on the bird’s part. Both are fluent from the start and enchantment to exert. Poems composed by poet with no expectation yet, whether to appreciate or rejection be the fate. Birds sing frolic in pleasure Songs : Their inherent treasures. Bird’s song : delightful desires, also they sing at leisure.
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