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Geese Honk

geese honk surround sound spring's emissary head north... invisible ghost
For PD On Saturday I could hear Canadian Geese honking while inside the house..I walked out to see them and it was like surround sound on a stereo almost as if they were in the trees but I could not see a goose anywhere..Sign that spring is here though.
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Dietrich Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 8:26 PM
I really liked yours on this list, Sara. BIG congrats
A  Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 1:28 PM
Sara, Congrats on your win. SKAT
Devnath  Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 12:47 PM
Congrats my sweet friend on your win. You have not seen the Indian goose perhaps, they honk much loudly. Ha ha ha... A beautiful poem of giggle. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
Carter Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 8:18 AM
Cute! Congrats on your quacky win! ~lee
A. Sharma Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 10:39 PM
Wonderful haiku Sara n a superb win! Big congrats!
Roper Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 5:23 PM
Awesome write, Sara, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
A   Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 2:40 PM
Sara :), Congratulations! Thank you for supporting my giggle haiku contest. I enjoyed reading every entry placed on the winning list. Stop by my latest blog "MY CAT" if you'd like or have the time. Yours Truly! ~LINDA~
Callus Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 1:03 PM
Lovely haiku, Sara; sound and sight tickle the imagination. #7 All the best. // paul
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March 10, 2015 at 2:58 AM
Great haiku and story...yes, spring is in the air! Hugs, Rhonda
Dietrich Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 6:17 PM
cool story associated with your poem and picture too, sara.
Cervenka Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 4:51 PM
I'm impressed that you kept true to the haiku structure. So many writers have begun to put however many syllables and call it haiku. The geese winter in my area, so we do not notice them as much until they come in the fall to winter, so its a reversal for me.
Fleming Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 2:23 PM
Truly one of natures most spectacular sights...Wild geese in flight!! My best regards, Sara. :) john.
Allison Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 2:07 PM
Beautifully penned Sara - I so seldom see the Canadian Geese flying and you brought this image straight into my room - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx 7 xxx
Onclaud Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 12:35 PM
love the tonality and fine image of this 'ku, sara... more on camelot soon.. huggs
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 12:31 PM
- A good spring signs - Lovely haiku, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Shaw Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 10:51 AM
Great haiku, Sara! Love the way you expressed a common event and made it special. Hugs, Kimberly
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