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. The flock of Canada geese fly south to winter they tire argue squawk disagree how nice it would be if they could stop rest eat sleep then move onward in their jour- ney

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Hilo Poet

Date: 11/15/2023 12:02:00 PM

Hmm, that is a beautiful sight/write, Sara. Birds fly out to sea just before an earthquake. They become agitated and flustered atop tree limbs. Similar actions when our volcano erupts. They all fly out to sea and most likely onto our neighbor islands. Cheers, my friend. Aloha, William

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/15/2023 1:36:00 PM

William, it is amazing how animals know things way before man knows them. They know how to take care of themselves. Thanks for dropping by and leaving such an educational comment. Sara K

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/13/2023 6:37:00 PM

Ingenious creation, Sara. Just like I see the geese flying south for winter. ~ gw

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/14/2023 4:58:00 AM

Thank you for the high praise, Gershon. I needed that kind review. Sara K

Jack Horne

Date: 11/11/2023 4:03:00 AM

clever write, my friend - I find these quite impossible, LOL. Mum 'saw' geese this morning (playing football in the garden)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/11/2023 4:52:00 AM

Jack, your mom adds a special touch to life doesn't she. Amazing at her visions. Thanks for dropping by . Sara K

Jude Herrick

Date: 11/10/2023 11:00:00 PM

I love geese. Whenever they return home, I get a little moisture on the eyeball. "Welcome home guys". Love the formation Sara. Flying v's and synchronized air swimming. Born to entertain in the skybox.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/11/2023 4:50:00 AM

Jude, I think that birds and the geese probably look just like fish in the water only it is air. They are lovely and I always know that winter is right around the corner, but I have not seen or heard them yet this year. Thanks for the nice review of my work. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/10/2023 2:04:00 PM

a marvelous Shape poem, Sara. I admire your ability to create such a poem. Your shape was perfect as were the words you chose to describe a flock of geese. I'm sincerely impressed. Am faving this for later. Have a great evening, Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/10/2023 1:38:00 PM

Sara, your shape poems exude a seamless flow, demonstrating not only your impeccable writing prowess but also your awe-inspiring innovation in this art form. Bol in the contest

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/10/2023 1:52:00 PM

Why, thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the time spent here. Saa K

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/10/2023 11:38:00 AM

- The characteristic V-formation when flying is beautiful, Sara ... lovely poem and shape :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/10/2023 1:34:00 PM

Anne-Lise, I do enjoy hearing and seeing them. The last few years I have been able to see them but not able to see them because of the sun or clouds. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 11/10/2023 10:02:00 AM

I really love how your shape poems flows, and how you’ve written and also the creative way you’ve done this shape form. I have been thinking of trying this form but not sure if i can do it like you and the rest so artistically. I think this will do very well in the new poem contest. I loved reading this. Sending you light always .

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/10/2023 1:33:00 PM

I am glad that you enjoyed it, IE. I would have liked it to look better but I might be able to do some improvements. Sara K

Mark Hughes

Date: 11/10/2023 9:46:00 AM

Aerodynamically, well done Sara!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/10/2023 1:32:00 PM

Thank you, Mark Hughes. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara K