Sara Kendrick Poet Shape

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Geese

. 
  The
        
 flock                       of
    
  Canada                   geese
 
     fly                       south
    
      to                           winter
   
   they                                  tire
  
  argue                                squawk
 
 disagree                                   how

nice                                                it

would                                               be

if                                                    they

could                                               stop

rest                                                   eat

sleep                                                  then 

move                                                   onward

in                                                           their

jour-                                                       ney

                                                         

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William Kelii Kekaula November 15, 2023 at 12:02 PM Hmm, that is a beautiful sight/write, Sara. Birds fly out to sea just before an earthquake. They become agitated and flustered atop tree limbs. Similar actions when our volcano erupts. They all fly out to sea and most likely onto our neighbor islands. Cheers, my friend. Aloha, William Sara Kendrick November 15, 2023 at 1:36 PM William, it is amazing how animals know things way before man knows them. They know how to take care of themselves. Thanks for dropping by and leaving such an educational comment. Sara K

Gershon Wolf November 13, 2023 at 6:37 PM Ingenious creation, Sara. Just like I see the geese flying south for winter. ~ gw Sara Kendrick November 14, 2023 at 4:58 AM Thank you for the high praise, Gershon. I needed that kind review. Sara K

Jack Horne November 11, 2023 at 4:03 AM clever write, my friend - I find these quite impossible, LOL. Mum 'saw' geese this morning (playing football in the garden) Sara Kendrick November 11, 2023 at 4:52 AM Jack, your mom adds a special touch to life doesn't she. Amazing at her visions. Thanks for dropping by . Sara K

Jude Herrick November 10, 2023 at 11:00 PM I love geese. Whenever they return home, I get a little moisture on the eyeball. "Welcome home guys". Love the formation Sara. Flying v's and synchronized air swimming. Born to entertain in the skybox. Sara Kendrick November 11, 2023 at 4:50 AM Jude, I think that birds and the geese probably look just like fish in the water only it is air. They are lovely and I always know that winter is right around the corner, but I have not seen or heard them yet this year. Thanks for the nice review of my work. Sara K

Sotto Poet November 10, 2023 at 1:38 PM Sara, your shape poems exude a seamless flow, demonstrating not only your impeccable writing prowess but also your awe-inspiring innovation in this art form. Bol in the contest Sara Kendrick November 10, 2023 at 1:52 PM Why, thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the time spent here. Saa K

Anne-Lise Andresen November 10, 2023 at 11:38 AM - The characteristic V-formation when flying is beautiful, Sara ... lovely poem and shape :) - hugs Sara Kendrick November 10, 2023 at 1:34 PM Anne-Lise, I do enjoy hearing and seeing them. The last few years I have been able to see them but not able to see them because of the sun or clouds. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Ink Empress November 10, 2023 at 10:02 AM I really love how your shape poems flows, and how you’ve written and also the creative way you’ve done this shape form. I have been thinking of trying this form but not sure if i can do it like you and the rest so artistically. I think this will do very well in the new poem contest. I loved reading this. Sending you light always . Sara Kendrick November 10, 2023 at 1:33 PM I am glad that you enjoyed it, IE. I would have liked it to look better but I might be able to do some improvements. Sara K

Mark Hughes November 10, 2023 at 9:46 AM Aerodynamically, well done Sara!! Sara Kendrick November 10, 2023 at 1:32 PM Thank you, Mark Hughes. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara K