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Geese

canadian geese
huddle 'pon dock in winter....
north  wind rocks their pond

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Andrea Dietrich

February 17, 2019 at 8:14 PM

cute imagery ,Sara.

Carolyn Devonshire

February 17, 2019 at 7:09 PM

Hi Sara, Soup mail on another topic. Hope you had a great weekend! Hugs, Carolyn

Jennifer Proxenos

February 17, 2019 at 12:49 AM

Hi Sara, you almost feel like chasing them into your garage at least - they must have been frozen, poor geese but heartfelt Haiku - lovely read. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Sara Kendrick

February 17, 2019 at 6:05 AM

Jennifer, Thanks for the visit to my page. Your review is uplifting. Yes, as a human it seems hard to understand how they withstand the cold but they do. Sara

Jack Horne

February 15, 2019 at 2:58 PM

love the mental picture I get from this

Sara Kendrick

February 15, 2019 at 4:21 PM

Jack, Those geese can rock your world for they are fun to watch but can carry the deadly flu virus. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

February 14, 2019 at 12:51 PM

A delightful, uplifting haiku, Sara. Hope they stay upon the dock for a thaw is expected in the Northeast. Best wishes, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

February 14, 2019 at 5:03 PM

Carolyn, The dock look very worn so don't know how much longer it will hold up for them. Thanks for the visit. Sara

M. L. Kiser

February 14, 2019 at 10:15 AM

And they always have cold feet! Brrrrrr, good one.

Sara Kendrick

February 14, 2019 at 5:02 PM

M.L., From a human point of view I can't see how they stand the cold but there is a scientific reason why they can. I can't explain it but you can look it up. Thanks for your visit and your review if uplifting. Sara

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

February 14, 2019 at 8:49 AM

Oh fantastic haiku Sara! A fave for me. xomo!

Sara Kendrick

February 14, 2019 at 9:10 AM

Maureen, I am honored that you would fav my work. Sara

Tom Cunningham

February 14, 2019 at 7:49 AM

Rather them.than me brrrr. Lovely image Sara. Hope your well. Tom.

Sara Kendrick

February 14, 2019 at 9:09 AM

Tom, I live in the south but we have got some Canada Geese who have settled here for some reason. I saw some the other day on a dock at a small pond and they were huddled up together like they were freezing hence the Haiku. Sara

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