Gee; Hate To See You Go

I bet you think you’re better than me; 
With your numbers and merits;
But I think you’re hiding;
Aren’t you?

You molded and folded;
Shaped and scraped;
Now everything fits;
Or does it?

I’m familiar with your concerns;
But I’ve noticed the holes; 
And I know;
Why you’re like that.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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January 12, 2010 at 7:24 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Leonard. Thank you so much for sharing it with us here at PoetrySoup. Love, Carol
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