Gee Gee

2007 July 05 was your mom’s black day
The moment you close your eyes her heart almost torn with her showering face
Pleasant hours always fly fast
Yet the quality of life also flapping very rapidly with silent past
 Gee Gee I hope you still remember Kawaii that met in the yesteryear
He had been playing with you for days while I was out of town in the past year
Unfortunately he just gone on the 4th of August and Auntie hopes you’ll take good care of him
I know without any request you already did with your loving mom’s hint
Darling Gee Gee, while you were barking, we didn’t see each other much
But my thinking and love for you always come with a kiss and a big hug
Actually I know your mom closed to two decades
 Good understanding with each other… doings and feelings without says
Well, was your mom told me went to the same breeder to have Kawaii
After counting the grades, you were his uncle with the same family my dear Gee Gee
In your mom’s heart, you were always a very smart and an obedient boy
Taking good care of the family and things in details without asking for treat or any toys
You were really awesome, your mom face still wet while we’re talking about you
No matter how long you’ve had vanished, still her love to you will never due
I think we soon will meet somewhere somehow with you two
If you forgot Kawaii’s face, don’t worry he’ll be wearing a beautiful pendant made by your beloved  mom…isn’t it cool?
August 08 2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 8/13/2012 2:38:00 PM
Difficult rhyme pattern good job! Light & Love
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