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Gazing Into the Starlit Sky

Gazing into the starlit sky for a peaceful realm, Delicate patterns a million light years away Where no one knows who or what is at the helm, Gazing into the starlit sky for a peaceful realm. The twinkling of innumerable stars can overwhelm, Amid the unfathomable reaches of the Milky Way Gazing into the starlit sky for a peaceful realm, Delicate patterns a million light years away. Gazing into the starlit sky for a peaceful realm Where no one knows who or what is at the helm, The twinkling of innumerable stars can overwhelm. Delicate patterns a million light years away Amid the unfathomable reaches of the Milky Way, Wherever the Great Creator resides is very faraway. written June 25, 2021 [This poem is a combination of the Triolet and the Sonnet, or a "Trionet," which I inadvertently created in May, 2021. It is listed under "Verse" in Poetry Soup's types.]

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Date: 6/26/2021 9:29:00 PM
"Where no one knows who or what is at the helm," Lovely!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/26/2021 10:14:00 PM
Thanks. I like this one myself. Your thought is so appreciated.
Date: 6/25/2021 7:29:00 PM
Nice one, Milton!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/25/2021 8:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim. I appreciate your visit and your comment.

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