L Milton Hankins Poet Triolet

Gazing Into the Starlit Sky

Gazing into the starlit sky for a peaceful realm,
Delicate patterns a million light years away
Where no one knows who or what is at the helm,
Gazing into the starlit sky for a peaceful realm.
The twinkling of innumerable stars can overwhelm,
Amid the unfathomable reaches of the Milky Way
Gazing into the starlit sky for a peaceful realm,
Delicate patterns a million light years away.

Gazing into the starlit sky for a peaceful realm
Where no one knows who or what is at the helm,
The twinkling of innumerable stars can overwhelm.
Delicate patterns a million light years away
Amid the unfathomable reaches of the Milky Way,
Wherever the Great Creator resides is very faraway.


written June 25, 2021
[This poem is a combination of the Triolet and the Sonnet,
or a "Trionet," which I inadvertently created in May, 2021.
It is listed under "Verse" in Poetry Soup's types.]

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Caren Krutsinger June 26, 2021 at 9:29 PM "Where no one knows who or what is at the helm," Lovely! L Milton Hankins June 26, 2021 at 10:14 PM Thanks. I like this one myself. Your thought is so appreciated.

Kim Rodrigues June 25, 2021 at 7:29 PM Nice one, Milton! L Milton Hankins June 25, 2021 at 8:25 PM Thank you so much, Kim. I appreciate your visit and your comment.