Abdul Malik Mandani Poet Verse

Gazelle Eyes

My love, my world revolves around
your mystifying gazelle eyes--
When you look at me
My day begins,
When you lower them
My sun sets!


~Visual 3 / Words 25
Abdul Malik 06/12/15
"Through Your Eyes" contest by nette Onclaud

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Andrea Dietrich June 23, 2015 at 9:25 PM this is so nice. I just love the title! Congrats.

Skat A June 22, 2015 at 4:33 PM Hi Abdul:) Congratulations on your win. Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A June 22, 2015 at 3:42 PM Abdul, Congratulations awesomely done. LINDA

Paul Callus June 22, 2015 at 2:46 PM I love this take, especially the final 4 lines!! Congratulations on your win...much deserved, Abdul. // paul Abdul Malik Mandani June 22, 2015 at 5:18 PM I am a sucker for beautiful eyes! They haunt me for days. Glad you liked it. Thanks.

John Lawless June 22, 2015 at 7:17 AM well done, well deserving of the win

Shadow Hamilton June 22, 2015 at 2:23 AM lovely well captured Abdul congrats on win hugs

Francine Roberts June 21, 2015 at 8:51 PM very pretty piece, congrats on your win

Jan Allison June 21, 2015 at 3:20 PM Dropping back with my congratulations Abdul:-) hugs Jan xx Abdul Malik Mandani June 22, 2015 at 5:10 PM Thanks Jan, YOUR eyes don't lie. Glad you were the first to read.

Mohamed Adel June 15, 2015 at 11:04 AM That was charming! keep it up, Abdul Malik :) Abdul Malik Mandani June 22, 2015 at 5:19 PM Thanks Mohamed. Happy Ramadan to you.

Jan Allison June 13, 2015 at 6:35 PM In MY eyes this is simply exquisite Abdul:-) good luck n the contest:-) hugs jan xx 7