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I talk to the trees but they don’t listen to me… I tell you my dreams and while you’re listening to me I suddenly see them come true —Alan Jay Lerner/Frederick Loewe I Talk to the Trees ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Gaze Out the Pane Gaze out the pane, As if a wand turned dark to light. Gaze out the pane, Green leaves morph murky to champagne. Piquant of trees; peaking’s excite. Wonders you miss with oversight. Gaze out the pane.

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Date: 6/8/2025 5:19:00 PM
A gorgeous Rondelet, Kim. <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/8/2025 8:26:00 PM
Thank you, Paige! :)
Date: 6/7/2025 2:55:00 PM
This is magical, Kim! I love the fourth and fifth lines, so much! Very best wishes. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/7/2025 4:46:00 PM
I so appreciate your comment, Evelyn! :)

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