Gaze of Love

Like blowing cold wind is time
You can’t escape it no matter how well you rhyme
Yet there is something besides passage of time
That is a gift that is most sublime

Her eyes are like of Love Sea
They shine with health depth and majesty
Like multiples of continuity 
Like soul of divinity

She is the gift of time and space
She is realization of last fundamental place
Of continuity multiples face
Beyond time itself ability is hidden under her sleeve visage of an ace

Wind gently blows through poplar tree
With it the wind brings unwritten destiny
But last fundamental place realized at the base is a key
To find one’s own version of it and be beyond whims of capricious destiny
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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July 4, 2014 at 4:59 PM
Hi Patrycjusz, this is such a beautiful romantic poem! Well done!
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