Gaze

High definition
crowd in surround sound
her face crystal clear


the scene seems to pause
zoom in on special featurs
press autofocus 

Again resumes play
heart beating in fast forward
DVD ejects



By Robb A. Kopp
For : Michael J. Falotico’s  "Eyes First Meet" contest ******** 3 Senryu's only
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 9:54 PM
Very original. I really like it.
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