Larry Bradfield Poet Verse

Gawdy

Good grief she was always
Gawdy from head to toe.
Gauche is too mild a word,
Grand would just be a hoax -
Goodlooking, that she was,
Glamorous was not close -
God, I loved her spirit!

November 30, 2016
For contest Pleiades G

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Kim Rodrigues February 9, 2017 at 9:09 PM Love this! Trying to figure out the best description! Congrats! Larry Bradfield February 9, 2017 at 9:17 PM Thank you, Kim !

Kim Merryman February 9, 2017 at 9:03 PM A unique topic and creative way to portray it! Great flowing lines! Congrats on your placement. Blessings, KIm Larry Bradfield February 9, 2017 at 9:16 PM Thanks for the kind words and the placement Kim!

Laura Leiser February 9, 2017 at 8:26 PM You captured the subject so well, Larry! Great job! Congrats on your win :) Larry Bradfield February 9, 2017 at 9:14 PM Thank you,Laura!

Jan Allison November 30, 2016 at 3:11 PM made me think of someone I know! Made me smile Larry:-) hugs Jan xx Larry Bradfield December 1, 2016 at 10:17 AM Thanks, Jan...makes me wonder if we ALL have someone like this in our pasts....Larry