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Gator Bait Series 2nd Crossing the Line

It’s that time of year when I think of you.... And all the strange things we used to do... We were young and cast our fate to the wind... Regardless of the message that we might send.. Out to the world , cause we didn’t care... And that’s what brings me here to share.... You treated me just like a queen honey bee.. And I believed and worshiped thee... We shared our ups and downs together... In thick and thin and stormy weather... What was mine was mine and yours was mine..... And we never ever crossed that line ! I assumed it would always be just you and me... As no one else appealed you see.... My friends said you will break my heart... But I told them that, I was just too smart.... As I remembered , what I was taught.... That no one could control my thought... And then it happened I lost my heart.... My bracelet, my watch and my college ring... And then you did that awful thing... You lied , you cheated , you had stolen my bling... And that’s why now you aren’t around.... Plus no way... will you EVER.... be found.... Cause I live where the GATOR is king...... And...like no one steals my BLING !

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Date: 5/16/2015 11:36:00 AM
Hah! And there he is in his old fishing hole being dined on by gators, just for the hell of it.
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Kj Force
Date: 5/16/2015 4:56:00 PM
And this dinner had several courses, starting with Turtle soup...he really turned out to be a " cursed prince "...and not even a Frog...just slimy slime. Thanks for visiting..I had a BLAST doing this series..and there will be more on the way...beats therapy !!!
Date: 10/22/2013 8:06:00 PM
Your personality shines like a diamond in this one! Excellent verse with fiery inspiration--makes the best compositions I'd say. Always, Laura
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Date: 10/22/2013 8:26:00 PM
Thanks..there's nothing I enjoy better than putting my thoughts regarding betrayl/cheating/abuse/attitude adjustment/ etc in a write..with a twist ! kj
Date: 10/21/2013 11:31:00 PM
A gator ate him I suppose / But who can say for no one knows / except the gators who are malicious / and brag that he was quite delicious.
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Date: 10/21/2013 11:53:00 PM
You got it right... He's out of sight.. no BBQ or Jalapeno.. just bite and swallow all this without a good vino.. thanks for the comment....

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