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Gathering Rasberries

As I gather the rasberries Thinking only of you With Dove's coo to entertain me As he sings his love too I will have to wash in water Damaged ones will have to curr Like God takes the damaged sir Transforms into another (Herbert Style)

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 6/14/2010 7:48:00 AM

nicely penned.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 6/12/2010 4:51:00 AM

Wow, raspberries, one of my favourite fruits!!!! Tastes so good with custard!!!! Enjoyed reading your write today, Sara! Thank you for your kind comments and have a nice weekend...Gert

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/11/2010 11:58:00 AM

Your poetry was a pleasure to read today Sara. May your weekend be full of love,good health and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 6/11/2010 10:09:00 AM

This is excellent. Water is always cleansing. I like the first stanza a lot. Great job! Joseph

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 6/11/2010 9:22:00 AM

A lovely piece of Poem. It is definitely God who transforms us anew as the human soul is immortal, it is only the body which changes it shape in a new form. Like we throw old clothes and wear anew one. Beautiful write my friend. And thanks for your precious comments on my poem The Sunshine. Love and best wishes.......Ravindra........Sara Kendrick.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/11/2010 6:37:00 AM

This is fine Sara ..so fine.. luv the comparison of the rasberries to God throwing the damaged sin away ..awesome write there ..very insightful.. ..HE does transform us all.. if we let HIM.. luv this .. with luv.. Linda-Marie..