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Gathering Rasberries

As I gather the rasberries
   Thinking only of you
With Dove's coo to entertain me
    As he sings his love too

I will have to wash in water
Damaged ones will have to curr
Like God takes the damaged sir
Transforms into another




(Herbert Style)

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2010

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Doris Culverhouse Date: 6/14/2010 7:48:00 AM nicely penned. Login to Reply

Gert W. Knop Date: 6/12/2010 4:51:00 AM Wow, raspberries, one of my favourite fruits!!!! Tastes so good with custard!!!! Enjoyed reading your write today, Sara! Thank you for your kind comments and have a nice weekend...Gert Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 6/11/2010 11:58:00 AM Your poetry was a pleasure to read today Sara. May your weekend be full of love,good health and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Joseph Spence Sr Date: 6/11/2010 10:09:00 AM This is excellent. Water is always cleansing. I like the first stanza a lot. Great job! Joseph Login to Reply

Ravindra K Kapoor Date: 6/11/2010 9:22:00 AM A lovely piece of Poem. It is definitely God who transforms us anew as the human soul is immortal, it is only the body which changes it shape in a new form. Like we throw old clothes and wear anew one. Beautiful write my friend. And thanks for your precious comments on my poem The Sunshine. Love and best wishes.......Ravindra........Sara Kendrick. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 6/11/2010 6:37:00 AM This is fine Sara ..so fine.. luv the comparison of the rasberries to God throwing the damaged sin away ..awesome write there ..very insightful.. ..HE does transform us all.. if we let HIM.. luv this .. with luv.. Linda-Marie.. Login to Reply