Gather

Gather,
at the ocean.
Indigo buntings nest -
contently near a crown of springs,
seaside.


(PoetrySoup Weekly Challenge
Theme: Ocean
Emotion: Contentment
Color: Indigo
Season: Spring
Form: Cinquain
Object: Crown
Verb: Gather)

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Nera Luminopoli

July 29, 2026 at 8:16 AM

I love your use of alliteration in "contently near a crown of springs," and "a crown of springs" itself is such a gorgeous image of nature. Beautiful poem!

Tania Kitchin

July 29, 2026 at 2:23 PM

Nera, thank you.

Sara Kendrick

July 29, 2026 at 7:27 AM

Enjoyed reading this one, Tania. Very colorful and expressive. Way to go. Sara K.

Tania Kitchin

July 29, 2026 at 2:23 PM

Sara, thank you.

Hiya Sharma

July 28, 2026 at 10:05 PM

Wow, this is so beautifully knitted for the poetry wheel challenge.. and I love how you've woven "Indigo buntings nest - contently near a crown of springs," a very gorgeous cinquain, dear Tania! Feels whimsical and calming.. loved reading. Sending you light and best wishes always ~

Tania Kitchin

July 29, 2026 at 3:55 AM

Hiya, thank you.