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shade tree... shadowy absorbing every whisper... ~ keeping her secrets

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/14/2020 2:08:00 AM

I am excited to say that I adore this one.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/14/2020 3:54:00 PM

Thank you so much! :) gw

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/8/2020 1:31:00 AM

That middle line has me intrigued: absorbing every whisper. Kind of brings to mind a different way to say, "If walls (in this case trees) could talk". I like the atmosphere of this haiku.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/8/2020 3:18:00 PM

And this haiku likes you too! ~ gw

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/7/2020 2:22:00 PM

Ooh, das is gorgeous ~x

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/7/2020 3:40:00 PM

...nightmare on elm juice

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/7/2020 3:17:00 PM

Ooh. Das is a gut vort, shayne maidele! A dank. ~ Herr Volfgang

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/7/2020 2:19:00 PM

Trees are so old, bet they have many stories to tell or secrets. Tom

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/7/2020 3:18:00 PM

If only trees could tell us their stories...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/7/2020 11:57:00 AM

For now...for now. Very nice

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/7/2020 3:21:00 PM

ha, ha. Maybe for the right price we can get a 'tell-all!' Thanks, Kim. ~ gw