Judas Zz Poet I do not know?

Gardens of Things Unspoken

Countless rose bushes I've grown
But none with this many thorns 
None sowed through so much scorn
None before destined to be this alone
None that grew so out of control
Leaving me so helpless
I could swear it had a life all its own
I can’t help but marvel at its form
Such a vivid red, 
Complimenting the darkest of green
So much beauty,
Hidden never to be seen
Eventually the petals will fall,
And it'll wither from existence
A miracle,
That made no difference
Wasted on a Garden of Darkness
Of a Gardener of things Unspoken.

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Poet Destroyer A February 23, 2016 at 8:42 PM Judas ZZ, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Carol Sunshine Brown May 26, 2011 at 6:49 AM Thank you for sharing the heart of your poetry with us here at Poetrysoup. I enjoyed reading your fasinating poetry this morning and I look forward to reading more of your poetry Judas. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta May 26, 2011 at 4:27 AM meaningful and deep expressions on life, Judas

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 25, 2011 at 6:57 PM Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your very creative write tonight.. hope u enjoy PS as u continue to share with luv..

Judas Zz May 25, 2011 at 3:40 PM Thanks a lot Leo. Spellcheckers and I don't get a long too well. Glad you enjoyed it!

Leo Larry Amadore May 25, 2011 at 3:23 PM A good piece of work, quite enjoyable...but, you might want to check the spelling of a couple of words and correct them ("thrones" or "thorns" and "peddles" or "petals"?)