Gardenias

Gleam
As snow
Rich deep white…
Divine sweet scent!
Enticed, I inhale…
Nights heaven sent
In moon bright
As glow
Streams


(Repost from 5/31/2016 for ‘Say it in Nine’ contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Romios Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 9:07 AM
Late on Congratulating you! What a stunning Ninette! Gardenias are my favorite. When I lived in SF and they sold flowers on street corners, I bought one..once or twice a week. Then floated it, in water. The whole house filled with that scent. I wear Jungle Gardenia cologne. It’s really awesome! Keep penning your delightful verses! Scentfully,)) Pangie xx
Woodrow Avatar
September 21, 2022 at 9:23 AM
Thank you Pangie! They are my fave and I actually wrote a poem about the first time i saw one years ago..that’s awesome floating them in water to scent the home..i used to find gardenia scents before but they seem to have stopped making them now.. my son gifted me a plant and i had it in a pot on my steps and someone walked off with it one night!
Gauthier Avatar
September 19, 2022 at 8:48 AM
Lovely ~
Woodrow Avatar
September 19, 2022 at 5:31 PM
Thank you :)
Slaughter Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 10:17 AM
I like these little lovelies, too. Wish I had read this piece back in May when Spring was filling the air with all its delicious aromas. Ah, well...better late than never, n'est-ce pas?
Woodrow Avatar
September 8, 2022 at 8:47 PM
They seem to be summer bloomers over here but definitely better coz they carry on the scenting when the early ones are done :)
Sambourne Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 7:31 AM
A top notch posting on Gardenias + their glorious smell. Much is said in 9 succinct lines. Most enjoyable. Brian
Woodrow Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 10:14 AM
Hi Brian, thank you. Glad you enjoyed it:)
Kauffman Avatar
August 23, 2022 at 10:20 AM
You have captured the fragrant essence of the gardenia perfectly! There is no other scent like it. They are like a bit of creamy moonlight on a stem! Congratulations on your win Susan. Hope you are staying cool in the heat of the valley! Blessings.
Woodrow Avatar
August 23, 2022 at 10:26 AM
Hi Sam! Thank you :) Love your creamy moonlight on a stem! Yes, white flowers on moonlit nights are special but when they are scented as well, it’s extra-special… I’m getting ready to head north to Shasta then Eureka to escape the heat…Hope all is well with you in the Bay :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 21, 2022 at 9:57 PM
Moon glowing on the stream as gardenias scent the night. Just beautiful Susan. Congratulations on your win. Blessings xxoo
Woodrow Avatar
August 22, 2022 at 7:24 AM
Thank you, Connie glad you like it :)
Alex Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 5:09 AM
Beautiful writing. Congratulations!
Woodrow Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 6:56 AM
Thank you :)
May Avatar
August 19, 2022 at 11:39 AM
Lovely write Susan, Congrats on your win
Woodrow Avatar
August 19, 2022 at 4:24 PM
Thanks for hosting Joseph.. glad u liked it :)
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