Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Rhyme

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Garden Song Nursery Rhyme

Such a funny bunny! 
             Hopped in my garden, 
             Grabbed a bunch of carrots, 
             And whizzed away! 

                                                           Such a chirpy sparrow, 
                                                           Perched on my willow, 
                                                           Tweet, tweet, tweet, 
                                                           Kept on singing hello! 

         Such a pretty swallowtail, 
         Kissed the radiant roses, 
         Magical bright colours, 
         Fluttered on the bushes. 

                                           
                                                 Sun shining so bright,  
                                                 Flowers are all smiling, 
                                                 Birds, bees, butterflies 
                                                 My garden is charming! 



                        March 22, 2021
                        For "Nursery Rhyme 3" Poetry Contest
                        Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Jan Allison April 7, 2021 at 2:35 PM Absolutely charming rhyme. Dropping back with many congrats on your win Mala:-) hugs Jan xx Malabika Ray Choudhury April 7, 2021 at 2:59 PM Dear Jan, Thank you so much. Really appreciate your lovely words.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 7, 2021 at 11:44 AM - A happy song children can learn ... enjoy this one, Mala :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Malabika Ray Choudhury April 7, 2021 at 11:59 AM Thanks, Anne-Lise. Really appreciate your loving and sweet words. Hugs ~ Mala

Kim Merryman April 6, 2021 at 11:21 AM Sounds delightful, Mala! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M Malabika Ray Choudhury April 6, 2021 at 4:07 PM Thank you, Kim. Really appreciate your kind words. Love ~ Mala

Sam Kauffman April 6, 2021 at 10:34 AM And so is your winning nursery rhyme, Mala - "charming" indeed! Love the blending of birds, bees, butterflies, bunnies and sparrows to create this oh so lovely picture of a child's gentle garden. Congratulations on your win! Sending you much love and blessings of joy dear friend! Here' to meeting in this garden of delights created by your pen! Malabika Ray Choudhury April 6, 2021 at 4:03 PM Thank you, Sam. Really appreciate your inspiring comments. It would be such an awesome experience - meeting my poet-friend in the garden of delights! Love and hugs ~ Mala

JC Brul April 6, 2021 at 1:13 AM Back with congratulations on your awesome win dear Mala! Blessings Malabika Ray Choudhury April 6, 2021 at 6:32 AM Thanks, Dear friend. Fun writing for children. Love ~ Mala

Alexis Y. April 5, 2021 at 10:39 PM Hi Malabika, You penned a good “ nursery rhyme” poem. Congratulations on your winning write. Have a good evening:-) Alexis Malabika Ray Choudhury April 6, 2021 at 6:31 AM Thanks, Alexis. Enjoyed writing nursery rhymes.

Eve Roper April 5, 2021 at 10:23 PM Malabika, great rhythm in this great nursery rhyme. Congratulations on your win. . Please join me at my blog Nursery Rhyme 3 Contest - Eve Roper's Blog (poetrysoup.com) Hugs Eve Malabika Ray Choudhury April 6, 2021 at 6:30 AM Thanks, Eve, it's a lot of fun! Thanks for inspiring me to write nursery rhymes. BW ~ Mala

Richard Lamoureux March 27, 2021 at 11:53 AM This is sweet. All the best in the contest. I like your accompanying picture. Thanks as well for your kind visit to my latest poem. do drop by again. :0)

Beryl Edmonds March 26, 2021 at 8:28 AM A charming garden song Mala, children will love it... Belle

Andrea Dietrich March 24, 2021 at 4:52 PM One word; adorable! Malabika Ray Choudhury March 24, 2021 at 5:13 PM That’s the best word! Thank you.

Mystic Rose Rose March 23, 2021 at 10:07 AM You took me to a happy place as I read this, I guess we are never to old to enjoy a nice nursery rhyme. :) thank you Malabika Ray Choudhury March 23, 2021 at 10:11 AM That’s very very true, Dear Friend. I really enjoyed writing nursery rhymes - so much fun! Love ~ Mala

Evelyn Judy Buehler March 23, 2021 at 6:40 AM This is such a bright and beautiful, happy nursery rhyme, sure to capture children's hearts and imaginations. Best wishes for the contest, my friend. Malabika Ray Choudhury March 23, 2021 at 6:43 AM Thank you, Evelyn. Children's poems are the best - aren't they? I loved yours.

Darlene De Beaulieu March 22, 2021 at 12:07 PM Hello Mala, i enjoyed this garden song poem. Oh, i agree with JCB you should do a book. Love, Darlene. Darlene De Beaulieu March 22, 2021 at 4:01 PM Hello Mala yes we all enjoy children and enjoy the songs for them. love Darlene Malabika Ray Choudhury March 22, 2021 at 12:20 PM Thanks, Darlene! We all love company of children, and enjoy songs for them! Love ~Mala

Vijay Pandit March 22, 2021 at 9:18 AM Much harmony resonates from your garden song, Mala. Beautiful sights and sounds sing along--in rhythms of your words. Really well done imagery. Malabika Ray Choudhury March 22, 2021 at 10:04 AM Thanks, Vijay! It’s a lot of fun ~ Mala

JC Brul March 22, 2021 at 9:15 AM And this poem is so enchanting! You can make a book of nursery rhymes one day soon. Keep coming dear Mala. Malabika Ray Choudhury March 22, 2021 at 10:05 AM Thank you so much, JCB. Writing for children is really fun ~ Mala