Garden of Evil

don't wanna live in her garden of evil...don't wanna make love in her lies
drawn to darkness
driven to destruction
doomed to death...
drowning in the whirlpool in the middle of her thighs...
she's a lyrical spy with the invisible touch...roses to thorns and  electric chairs into thrones
sitting on high she sifts me like wheat..once smart and strong now worthless and weak
magnet to the misery she inflicts on me like a pretty predator...
it's a *** horror movie and she's the director
the invasive inspector...she never misses a beat
i'm sweating bullets in her lyrical heat
cupid leaves me stupid with his annihilation arrows...
i fall to the earth like shotgunned sparrows
her mind is narrow and her aim is dead on
i run through her garden of evil singing the same sad song
the snare unfolds like mental minefields in a genocidal generals worst defeat
the trap is tripped and the pain is long...upside down from her whipping tree
cat claws sprout as my body screams...neurotic nightmares and domination dreams
the web wraps around my heart,mind,and soul...
nowhere to run and nowhere to go
so i ride and roll in her garden of evil for eternity

anthony_beesley@yahoo.com
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 10/14/2010 8:55:00 PM
Hi! Anthony,"wow! your spell bounding words are captured perfect in this poem. A little sad with happy twisted emotions to go through amazing with them deep thoughts. But, like you said at the end, ( evil for eternaity )I really did enjoyed the ending. take care,..p.d.
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Date: 8/14/2010 11:37:00 AM
Wow Anthony so much emotion, I love that and the images you bring across.. Enjoy your weekend ¤ Wilma
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Date: 8/13/2010 7:11:00 PM
ANTHONY, U R NOW 1 OF MY FAVORITE PoETS HeRe oN THE SoUP. U HAVE A DEEP AND LIGHTED WAY WITH PoETRY*luv~SKAT
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Date: 8/13/2010 2:39:00 PM
The pain in this is I feel and to a point I can relate in my past so I feel this word by word amazing write x sarah x
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