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Garden Jewel

vision of blurred beats casts a ruby throat sparkling precious gem setting 18.08.16

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Aniruddha Pathak
Date: 8/27/2018 12:56:00 AM
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A beautiful haiku indeed
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/27/2018 8:11:00 AM
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Thank you Aniruddha :) xomo!
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Warren Doll
Date: 8/22/2018 8:50:00 AM
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A masterful haiku, Maureen. Going into my FAVS. Warren
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/27/2018 8:10:00 AM
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Wow! :)) Thank you Warren! xomo
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J.W. Earnings
Date: 8/22/2018 1:15:00 AM
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Oooh spectacular one here!
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/27/2018 8:10:00 AM
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Thank you J.W.! :) xomo
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Roy Pett
Date: 8/19/2018 6:52:00 AM
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Absolutely wonderful Maureen, never seen a ruby throat but your haiku has created beautiful images. :))
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/19/2018 8:41:00 AM
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Thank you Roy! I typo'd and the predictive text thought I wanted to say thank you army ;p xomo!
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Susan Ashley
Date: 8/17/2018 10:02:00 PM
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Oh how beautiful, Maureen. A brilliant haiku. Best wishes for a win! ~Susan
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/18/2018 8:22:00 AM
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Thank you lovely! xomo <3
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/17/2018 6:58:00 PM
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lovely imagery, Maureen!
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/18/2018 8:22:00 AM
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Thank you Andrea :) didn't think I'd have one for this contest, but a ruby-throated hummingbird said otherwise ;) xomo!
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Silent One
Date: 8/17/2018 3:12:00 PM
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You do these so well... Ku Queen..
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/18/2018 8:20:00 AM
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...Queen someth'n! Giggles! Thank you so much Sweet One xomo
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/17/2018 10:00:00 AM
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This shows the real sweet Mo!!! Love, Happy Jack XOX
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/17/2018 10:56:00 AM
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Smooches! Thank you love <3 xomo!
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/17/2018 6:52:00 AM
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Amazing my dear friend, Maureen! Good luck ! Hugs xxx
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/17/2018 7:47:00 AM
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Thank you sweet Demetrios! I saw a Ruby Throated Butterfly in my friend's garden yesterday- you would love her garden ;) love and hugs! xomo
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/17/2018 12:20:00 AM
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the first line sets the tone perfectly, Maureen, and the last line ends it perfectly.
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/17/2018 7:43:00 AM
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Thank you! Was lucky enough to see a ruby throated hummingbird yesterday :)) xomo!

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