Garden Jewel

vision of blurred beats 
                       casts a ruby throat sparkling
                            precious gem setting




18.08.16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Pathak Avatar
August 27, 2018 at 12:56 AM
A beautiful haiku indeed
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 27, 2018 at 8:11 AM
Thank you Aniruddha :) xomo!
Doll Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 8:50 AM
A masterful haiku, Maureen. Going into my FAVS. Warren
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August 27, 2018 at 8:10 AM
Wow! :)) Thank you Warren! xomo
Breidenthal Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 1:15 AM
Oooh spectacular one here!
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August 27, 2018 at 8:10 AM
Thank you J.W.! :) xomo
Pett Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 6:52 AM
Absolutely wonderful Maureen, never seen a ruby throat but your haiku has created beautiful images. :))
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 8:41 AM
Thank you Roy! I typo'd and the predictive text thought I wanted to say thank you army ;p xomo!
Ashley Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 10:02 PM
Oh how beautiful, Maureen. A brilliant haiku. Best wishes for a win! ~Susan
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August 18, 2018 at 8:22 AM
Thank you lovely! xomo <3
Dietrich Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 6:58 PM
lovely imagery, Maureen!
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August 18, 2018 at 8:22 AM
Thank you Andrea :) didn't think I'd have one for this contest, but a ruby-throated hummingbird said otherwise ;) xomo!
One Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 3:12 PM
You do these so well... Ku Queen..
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 8:20 AM
...Queen someth'n! Giggles! Thank you so much Sweet One xomo
Ellison Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 10:00 AM
This shows the real sweet Mo!!! Love, Happy Jack XOX
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August 17, 2018 at 10:56 AM
Smooches! Thank you love <3 xomo!
Trifiatis Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 6:52 AM
Amazing my dear friend, Maureen! Good luck ! Hugs xxx
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 7:47 AM
Thank you sweet Demetrios! I saw a Ruby Throated Butterfly in my friend's garden yesterday- you would love her garden ;) love and hugs! xomo
Krutsinger Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 12:20 AM
the first line sets the tone perfectly, Maureen, and the last line ends it perfectly.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 7:43 AM
Thank you! Was lucky enough to see a ruby throated hummingbird yesterday :)) xomo!
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