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Garden Hose

Walking on grassy ground tripped on a garden hose awoke from sleep a greyhound when the water jet hit its nose in a flash I sprang from the ground the greyhound close at my paws ran even faster than sound to make it to the entrance hole hissing at the weeping hound went to tackle the turkey in the bowl First Place: Regina McIntosh-Pet Rhyme-10/10/19 Third Place: Brian Strand: Podium-1/13/21 Fifth Place: Julie Leigh Rodeheaver-Funny-11/7/17 Fourth Place: BJ Legros Kelly-Beloved Pets Contest-3/26/23

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Date: 4/5/2023 10:22:00 AM
So fun Frances and delightfully written. Congratulations on your win. Easter blessings of joy to you!
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Date: 3/27/2023 12:42:00 AM
Thank you for entering this poetry contest Frances, and congratulations on your placement! :)
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Frances Schiavina
Date: 3/27/2023 7:24:00 AM
Thank you for making me happy with placement.
Date: 5/23/2020 9:34:00 PM
I like the imagery of the greyhound.
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Date: 10/10/2019 8:11:00 AM
Cute!! Congrats on your win
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Date: 10/10/2019 7:39:00 AM
What a cute poem, many congratulations on your win Frances:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/10/2019 7:12:00 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, Frances :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/10/2019 7:00:00 AM
Congratulations and I loved this. So cute. Bless you always, Gina
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Date: 11/9/2017 11:45:00 PM
Oh, I enjoyed the original take and story - well-done, Frances ... congrats on your win, too! Blessings! :-)
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Date: 11/8/2017 2:23:00 PM
Cat's meow!! Congrats!!! Sara
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Date: 11/2/2017 3:26:00 PM
Lovely poem-- cute story, Frances!
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