Garden Haikus

the lonely willow in the middle of the lawn absence of children flight of seeds blown to a child's joy dandelion to the sun roses bloom open eyes blink tears By CarolineCecile Copyright 7/2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 1:11 AM
I sure enjoyed seeing these three garden haikus, Caroline. They are so poignant.
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July 30, 2011 at 5:22 PM
What a lovely description in the last two verses, Caroline. First verse made me sad. We used to play in weeping willows when I was a kid. Very beautiful! I didn't know you were posting again. So happy to read your words. Love, Carolyn
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July 30, 2011 at 1:36 PM
Excellent write, touching, I know the feeling well....God bless...old Jack
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