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Garden haikus

the lonely willow in the middle of the lawn absence of children flight of seeds blown to a child's joy dandelion to the sun roses bloom open eyes blink tears By CarolineCecile Copyright 7/2011

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Date: 8/2/2011 1:11:00 AM
I sure enjoyed seeing these three garden haikus, Caroline. They are so poignant.
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Date: 7/30/2011 5:22:00 PM
What a lovely description in the last two verses, Caroline. First verse made me sad. We used to play in weeping willows when I was a kid. Very beautiful! I didn't know you were posting again. So happy to read your words. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/30/2011 1:36:00 PM
Excellent write, touching, I know the feeling well....God bless...old Jack
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