Gap

there is a big gap between me, and reality, something’s off I live and thirst for normality but there’s a without a doubt ~void 08/8/2021

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/13/2021 12:15:00 PM

You are searching for something my dear friend, it will come to you like a flash of light one day. You are such a wonderful human being that i cannot imagine any void in your life, the gap will come to pass. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/13/2021 12:52:00 AM

This is fascinating, at least to me... Hope you can close the gap a bit... ~ gw

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/8/2021 12:36:00 PM

Hello Alexis Y., everyone feels a void in their life now an then. enjoy your day my friend.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/8/2021 11:28:00 AM

Words of wisdom Alexis. Tom

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 8/8/2021 5:42:00 AM

Well written Alexis. The biggest void is in men's heads. Hugs.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/8/2021 5:23:00 AM

So true--meaningful write, Alexis.