.game Over.

ive lost the fight 
with my life.
it's over
now im done
i need to go 
i cant give in
so easy 
to turn and run.
i search and search all over.
but there's nothing to live for.
look left right
everywhere
ive won the fight 
but lost the war.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Neshat Avatar
May 16, 2009 at 12:10 AM
strong one, remember we are not perfect. You will find you re looking for just be patient
Anderson Avatar
April 16, 2009 at 5:58 AM
you say what many "poets" are afraid to say. that in its self is a form of brilliance. bravo
Burton Avatar
January 6, 2009 at 7:21 AM
buy her some flowers and a bottle of aliza, hoped i spelled it right, seems like your releasing ya feustration with some poetry and thats the best time when it bgings out great work. enjoyed reading it. have a great day.
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