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Game of Starbucks

I am standing In a line scene Cuz my body Needs its caffeine And in front of me some dink Orders a confusing drink Now he’s changing ‘round his order With our patients growing shorter And a sword from Someone’s pocket Now sticks through the Guy’s eye socket Du du du du Du du du du Du du du-du du-du du-du...

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/30/2021 8:27:00 AM

Such a catchy rhythm and flow -- for a 'Murder Poem,' Anthony. lol. ~ gw

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/27/2014 6:15:00 PM

Anthony, This happens to be an excellent poem, to have featured on the poetry soup's home page. Congratulations, enjoy having your poem featured this week. Always ~ LINDA ~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/25/2014 5:17:00 PM

Great one, LOL, I know how it feels Anthony,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/25/2014 6:07:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Anthony :) - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)