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Errant hounds capriciously bustle in an exceptional position near some forsaken backwatered millpond during some quietude noontime dismal conclusion concerning the game, Per some dense overgrowth forward furnishes an exquisite refuge over the stalked moreover the superfluous breathing of one well-earned evanescent freedom comprise paid via the pursuers prevailing pattern during this auspicious consequence, Preeminent preyed scampers incessantly before optimism regarding its autonomy of a choice pursuit that endures stirringly as an affirmed conclusion achieves its goal amidst a unique resonance due upon by a fatal singular blast. In the end, the right to life and the right to survive is the name of the game. Date: 08/27/2019

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Arturo Michael

Date: 8/28/2019 8:22:00 AM

An eloquent write indeed...Your last lines says it bold...Well done

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/28/2019 1:37:00 PM

Thesaurus used purposed for PS vocabulary scoring long versus short, this came at 3.71 while the short came at 13.00--thanks Arturo ~ Aloha William