Game

Decisions were made Life was great Just like the previous ones It break Just like some cycle repeated But this time I cheated As I thought It wasn’t so easy To decide It was greedy My life was familiar It reminds me of my past Until I realize It was a game that was pass

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Beata Agustin

Date: 12/11/2024 9:38:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Date: 10/2/2017 10:38:00 AM

A life well lived needs to be fresh, free from preoccupation. But often our life appears cyclic, its events are periodic. Nice poem evoking a new way of thinking and looking at things. Great poem.