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Gambit

If we sacrifice, that what we possess, allusion being to ego we know, this gambit pays off, for as we undress and conditioned beliefs slowly let go, released from erst fears, we begin to flow. Thought fetters that bound and twirled us around, viewed with nonchalance, no longer astound, since having vaporised and merged with space, we are from head to toe, in bliss mists drowned, imbibing breath by breath, God’s sublime grace.

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Date: 6/30/2023 12:46:00 PM
Dear, US, allow me to express my profound admiration for your exquisite poem, replete with remarkable metaphors that transcend the boundaries of ordinary language. Heartfelt felicitations on your well-deserved win, as this literary gem has undoubtedly earned its rightful place in my personal favorites.
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Date: 6/30/2023 8:09:00 PM
Thank you, SP :)
Date: 6/30/2023 10:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your write/ending. Have a blessed day/weekend....................
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Date: 6/30/2023 8:08:00 PM
Thank you, Paula, delighted you enjoyed ~ have a great weekend ahead

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