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Writing Challenge - G word - Poetry Contest

Sponsor - Constance La France

Date written: 06/25/2023

non-stop rat-a-tats moving targets drop like flies ~ blood-soaked western front a fierce, friendly fire soldier retrieves dead comrade ~ own life hangs by thread

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Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

Date: 6/30/2023 8:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the Contest...Ibeh.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/1/2023 7:31:00 AM

Thank you very much, Alfonso:-)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/30/2023 11:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A powerful write in a few words. Have a blessed day/weekend....................

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/1/2023 7:31:00 AM

Thank you so much, Paula:-)