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Galaxy of Feelings

She looks through flickering candlelight, at his shining eyes There's a galaxy of feelings, a million stars in the skies She wants to ask him, will you take me where you are? So she can wish upon every sparkling star... She holds back a tear, so it won't splash on his happiness She wants what is best for him, more than stardust, nothing less She retreats to the shadows, in the corners of her mind She believes it is her, who he will never find... She wonders what could have been, if he had traveled far? She wishes for him the light of every single star She is actually home alone, sitting in her own sorrow She believes it is her, who he may never know... Then she hears a knock at the front door She opens it to find him, standing on her floor Tears of joy burst through silence, as he holds her tight She learns he's known her all along, on this special night As the candlelight flickers, a galaxy of feelings, they sit still She has loved him for all these years into forever, always will Heidi Sands 8/17/23

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Date: 9/6/2023 12:26:00 PM
Very lovely!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/6/2023 12:33:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 8/21/2023 3:44:00 AM
Oh my, how splendid, euphoric, heavenly and magical this piece is.. Full of gorgeous descriptions, delicate emotion, love filled aura, hope and wishful atmosphere.. Almost like a fairytale coming true wow! I certainly got emotional while reading this, so well crafted, a beautiful love! "There's a galaxy of feelings, a million stars in the skies", " She has loved him for all these years into forever, always will" Love this piece so much! Hugs~ Hiya :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/21/2023 6:07:00 AM
Thank you for the kind feedback. I am happy to hear that you love this. I hope you have a great day :)
Date: 8/18/2023 3:21:00 PM
Heidi, an enchanting tale of love, illustrates the timeless truth that soul mates are destined to unite, defying all obstacles in their path.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/18/2023 3:38:00 PM
Thank you very much for your positive input. I appreciate it. I hope you have a nice evening :)
Date: 8/17/2023 7:55:00 PM
Wow such an ethereal write and so many emotions. the ending made me tear up too. I love how you’ve painted imagery and the flow of your storytelling here. I especially loved the lines “ galaxy of feelings million stars in the night” ah such an evocative write this is . Felt every word and your use of descriptive language is impeccable
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/18/2023 6:10:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and kind feedback on this. I appreciate it very much! I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 8/17/2023 7:21:00 PM
"She wants what is best for him, more than stardust, nothing less." That's true love, unconditional happiness. This is beautiful, tender and romantic, all at the same time. Your thoughts curl softly around me and my heart. My best to you, Heidi. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/18/2023 6:08:00 AM
Thank you so much Brandy. I am happy to see your comment. Hugs :)
Date: 8/17/2023 6:27:00 PM
I love the line, 'she wishes for him the light of every single star.' A powerful love story.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/18/2023 6:07:00 AM
Thank you Jerry. I appreciate your kind feedback :)
Date: 8/17/2023 4:19:00 PM
A wonderful love story, Heidi ... Soul mates will always find each other, no matter what :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/18/2023 6:07:00 AM
Thank you very .uch Kelly :)
Date: 8/17/2023 2:18:00 PM
Love is written in the stars, I like the ending to this wonderful write Heidi, hugs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/17/2023 2:38:00 PM
Yes, written in the stars. Thank you Joseph. Hugs :)
Date: 8/17/2023 1:34:00 PM
I see what you mean, very uncanny but you know what they say, great minds think alike. :) Really nice Heidi and such a happy poem to read.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/17/2023 1:47:00 PM
Hi Chris. Isn't it? True, great minds think alike. Thank you very much :)
Date: 8/17/2023 1:00:00 PM
- The power of destiny, Heidi ... faced with the mystery of love :) - Love it :) - hugs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/17/2023 1:04:00 PM
Yes. Thank you Anne-Lise. I am happy you love it. I appreciate your kind comment. Hugs :)
Date: 8/17/2023 12:03:00 PM
Sweet serendipity Heidi, poetically portrayed
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/17/2023 12:15:00 PM
Thank you Tom. I appreciate your visit and comment :)
Date: 8/17/2023 10:52:00 AM
Symphony of emotions paint a story of love, my friend. Two souls who dreamt of each other--finally meet to celebrate love and longing --that was always there. I like the happy ending of your poem, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/17/2023 10:54:00 AM
Thank you very much Vijay. I appreciate your kind feedback. I hope your day is going well :)

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