Galaxy of Feelings

She looks through flickering candlelight, at his shining eyes
There's a galaxy of feelings, a million stars in the skies
She wants to ask him, will you take me where you are?
So she can wish upon every sparkling star...
She holds back a tear, so it won't splash on his happiness
She wants what is best for him, more than stardust, nothing less
She retreats to the shadows, in the corners of her mind
She believes it is her, who he will never find...
She wonders what could have been, if he had traveled far?
She wishes for him the light of every single star
She is actually home alone, sitting in her own sorrow
She believes it is her, who he may never know...
Then she hears a knock at the front door
She opens it to find him, standing on her floor
Tears of joy burst through silence, as he holds her tight
She learns he's known her all along, on this special night
As the candlelight flickers, a galaxy of feelings, they sit still
She has loved him for all these years into forever, always will

Heidi Sands

8/17/23
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Alhemaidy Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 12:26 PM
Very lovely!
Sands Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 12:33 PM
Thank you :)
Sharma  Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 3:44 AM
Oh my, how splendid, euphoric, heavenly and magical this piece is.. Full of gorgeous descriptions, delicate emotion, love filled aura, hope and wishful atmosphere.. Almost like a fairytale coming true wow! I certainly got emotional while reading this, so well crafted, a beautiful love! "There's a galaxy of feelings, a million stars in the skies", " She has loved him for all these years into forever, always will" Love this piece so much! Hugs~ Hiya :)
Sands Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 6:07 AM
Thank you for the kind feedback. I am happy to hear that you love this. I hope you have a great day :)
Poet Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 3:21 PM
Heidi, an enchanting tale of love, illustrates the timeless truth that soul mates are destined to unite, defying all obstacles in their path.
Sands Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 3:38 PM
Thank you very much for your positive input. I appreciate it. I hope you have a nice evening :)
Empress Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 7:55 PM
Wow such an ethereal write and so many emotions. the ending made me tear up too. I love how you’ve painted imagery and the flow of your storytelling here. I especially loved the lines “ galaxy of feelings million stars in the night” ah such an evocative write this is . Felt every word and your use of descriptive language is impeccable
Sands Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 6:10 AM
Thank you for your visit and kind feedback on this. I appreciate it very much! I hope you have a nice day :)
Nicole Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 7:21 PM
"She wants what is best for him, more than stardust, nothing less." That's true love, unconditional happiness. This is beautiful, tender and romantic, all at the same time. Your thoughts curl softly around me and my heart. My best to you, Heidi. :) Hugs, Brandy
Sands Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 6:08 AM
Thank you so much Brandy. I am happy to see your comment. Hugs :)
Brotherton Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 6:27 PM
I love the line, 'she wishes for him the light of every single star.' A powerful love story.
Sands Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 6:07 AM
Thank you Jerry. I appreciate your kind feedback :)
Deschler Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 4:19 PM
A wonderful love story, Heidi ... Soul mates will always find each other, no matter what :)
Sands Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 6:07 AM
Thank you very .uch Kelly :)
May Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 2:18 PM
Love is written in the stars, I like the ending to this wonderful write Heidi, hugs
Sands Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 2:38 PM
Yes, written in the stars. Thank you Joseph. Hugs :)
Green Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 1:34 PM
I see what you mean, very uncanny but you know what they say, great minds think alike. :) Really nice Heidi and such a happy poem to read.
Sands Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 1:47 PM
Hi Chris. Isn't it? True, great minds think alike. Thank you very much :)
Andresen Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 1:00 PM
- The power of destiny, Heidi ... faced with the mystery of love :) - Love it :) - hugs
Sands Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 1:04 PM
Yes. Thank you Anne-Lise. I am happy you love it. I appreciate your kind comment. Hugs :)
Pandit Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 10:52 AM
Symphony of emotions paint a story of love, my friend. Two souls who dreamt of each other--finally meet to celebrate love and longing --that was always there. I like the happy ending of your poem, Heidi.
Sands Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 10:54 AM
Thank you very much Vijay. I appreciate your kind feedback. I hope your day is going well :)
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