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Galactic Traveler

Galactic Traveler
Alone in time and space
Lost in eternal paths
And orbits that you trace 
Cosmic cartographer
Through nothingness you turn
In hope some distant eye
Could faintly see you burn

Transiting the heavens
Resplendent angels' course
All of your life unknown
Viewed vividly in force
Eclipsing every eye
Lightning speed, sudden flash
Earth's extinction event
Reducing us to ash

8/26/2016

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Laura Hay

Date: 9/21/2016 10:26:00 AM

Loving your acrostic galactic poem, well deserved win Jesse, warm regards, Laura.

Jesse Rowe
Date: 9/22/2016 7:47:00 AM

Thank you for the like.

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/18/2016 4:13:00 PM

Such a great Acrostic poem that images the unending galactic space and how insignificant and vulnerable Earth is in its scheme. Well done, and congratulations on your Trophy First Place win, Jesse. Sandra

Laura Leiser

Date: 9/18/2016 3:16:00 PM

Congrats on your tip top win, Jesse! Great poem in your acrostic :)

Jesse Rowe
Date: 9/19/2016 7:30:00 AM

Thanks for the comment

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/18/2016 2:38:00 PM

Great! Congrats!

Ironic Zink

Date: 9/18/2016 1:46:00 PM

What's up Jesse!? Congrats on the big win! and Thank You for your entry

Ironic Zink
Date: 9/19/2016 11:27:00 PM

You have been slaying the acrostics... I've yet to place 1st but I am not giving up...; Keep on being you and never stop writing no mater what : "they" say!!!

Jesse Rowe
Date: 9/19/2016 7:29:00 AM

This is awesome. Thanks for the recognition.

John Fleming

Date: 8/26/2016 12:49:00 PM

Very cleverly composed, Jesse - Excellent lines! My best regards. :) john P.s A seven.