Galactic Star


Galactic star burst, Cinematic shining versed
Playing into you, Dreams being rehearsed
A unique set of ways, In your milky ways
Though led in light, Your darkness is deeply portrayed 
What is to shining, Of a shooting star
To wish a dream, Mused of a rising star
Enlightened fragment, Peacefully displaced
Constellations, Of a deeper trace
To rise and set, Of ones reflect
The brightest stars, Cause and effect
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Capitano Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 7:27 AM
Wonderful rhyme scheme and theme.
Diaz Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 8:01 AM
Thank you Phil
Leiser Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 6:38 PM
Very nicely written, Tiffany, with great rhythm, too! I enjoyed reading this :)
Diaz Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 8:57 AM
TY Laura....Glad you enjoyed it!!
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