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Galactic Revelation

Galactic Revelation

Galactic ecstatic
Astronomy fanatic

Telescopic seekers
ET creatures

Future destinations
Human habitations

Searching affinity
Beyond infinity

Universal equation
Life’s revelation

Copyright © Laura Hay | Year Posted 2016

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Winged Warrior Date: 9/10/2016 7:25:00 AM A galactic couplet...beautiful in its form...god bless...^WW^ Login to Reply Laura Hay Date: 9/14/2016 10:17:00 AM Many thanks for stopping by to ready and comment WW, much appreciated

Timothy Hicks Date: 8/31/2016 3:03:00 PM Fun to read aloud, Laura, with a bubbly rhythm. You put a fair amount of thought into each couplet with a sparse amount of words. Wish you the best in the wordplay contest. Login to Reply Laura Hay Date: 9/1/2016 4:21:00 AM Many thanks for stopping by Timothy! I appreciate your kind critique, warm regards, Laura.

Duke Beaufort Date: 8/25/2016 5:58:00 PM Each one, Laura, has charm and meaning. You have been so thoughtful and clever. There is a lot to think about, and so much is unknown to us. We are close, but can't quite make sense out of what's out there. It's just a big mystery that we think we can make sense out of, and we try. Login to Reply Laura Hay Date: 8/26/2016 4:55:00 AM We do indeed try Duke, thanks for your kind comments and for stopping by, warm regards, Laura.

Paul Callus Date: 8/23/2016 5:48:00 PM I am no astronomy fanatic, Laura, but that does not hinder me from understanding and liking your poem! gl in the contest:) ~ Sorry at not being able to help you out with italic format, etc; have not been able to work it out yet!! ~ Warm regards // paul Login to Reply Laura Hay Date: 8/24/2016 7:37:00 AM Thank very much you Paul! :) I see San has kindly advised on the italics so hope i can get it to work ;) Warm regards, Laura.