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Galactic Revelation

Galactic Revelation

Galactic ecstatic
Astronomy fanatic

Telescopic seekers
ET creatures

Future destinations
Human habitations

Searching affinity
Beyond infinity

Universal equation
Life’s revelation

spacecouplet

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Winged Warrior

September 10, 2016 at 7:25 AM

A galactic couplet...beautiful in its form...god bless...^WW^

Laura Hay

September 14, 2016 at 10:17 AM

Many thanks for stopping by to ready and comment WW, much appreciated

Timothy Hicks

August 31, 2016 at 3:03 PM

Fun to read aloud, Laura, with a bubbly rhythm. You put a fair amount of thought into each couplet with a sparse amount of words. Wish you the best in the wordplay contest.

Laura Hay

September 1, 2016 at 4:21 AM

Many thanks for stopping by Timothy! I appreciate your kind critique, warm regards, Laura.

Duke Beaufort

August 25, 2016 at 5:58 PM

Each one, Laura, has charm and meaning. You have been so thoughtful and clever. There is a lot to think about, and so much is unknown to us. We are close, but can't quite make sense out of what's out there. It's just a big mystery that we think we can make sense out of, and we try.

Laura Hay

August 26, 2016 at 4:55 AM

We do indeed try Duke, thanks for your kind comments and for stopping by, warm regards, Laura.

Paul Callus

August 23, 2016 at 5:48 PM

I am no astronomy fanatic, Laura, but that does not hinder me from understanding and liking your poem! gl in the contest:) ~ Sorry at not being able to help you out with italic format, etc; have not been able to work it out yet!! ~ Warm regards // paul

Laura Hay

August 24, 2016 at 7:37 AM

Thank very much you Paul! :) I see San has kindly advised on the italics so hope i can get it to work ;) Warm regards, Laura.

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