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Galactic Ocean

galactic ocean elysian waves roar roiling galactic ocean ~ a stellar fanfare celestial shores gleam with an astral signature ~ the cosmic heart beats nebulas birth seas from swirling coral-blue clouds ~ seaways of star glitz hymns of starry rhythms sentinels for delta stars ~ tides of star stories

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/6/2023 10:11:00 PM

These are wonderful. Such lovely imagery, Sam

Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/7/2023 10:22:00 AM

Many thanks Andrea! I love the fact that haiku uses imagery as a basic tenet for the haiku form. Such fun to imagine the galaxy in terms of vivid images like a celestial ocean! Blessings and prayers!

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/3/2023 3:34:00 PM

Dear Sam, your poetry is a testament to the art of metaphor. The profound ideas you express through captivating imagery are truly remarkable, my dear friend. Your most recent haiku, in particular, resonated with me: the celestial melodies guiding celestial sentinels, as they weave tales of distant stars across the cosmic tides.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/3/2023 1:37:00 AM

Brilliant writing, Sam:) enjoyed all the haikus:)

Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/7/2023 10:20:00 AM

Hi Jo! This string was such fun to imagine and write! So glad you enjoyed the haikus as I have been enjoying your foray into haiku! Thank you for your lovely feedback! Blessings.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/30/2023 1:26:00 PM

- Each individual haiku has its own beauty, Sam - Excellently written :) - hugs

Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/2/2023 4:26:00 PM

Thank you so much Anne-Lise. The Galaxy, for me, is like "roiling ocean" - always moving in waves of beauty on a celestial shore. Just watched a wonderful cooking show called New Scandinavian Cooking" filmed in Norway. Have seen the show before. The scenery was amazing and so beautiful! The recipes look amazing. Blessings and hugs!!