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Gal In Red Tableau

My guy turns to stare
at a gal like me -
slim with long brown hair
Why might he obsess?
It has to be the
sexy cute red dress!


March 28, 2021
For Joseph May's Tableau 2 Poetry Contest
(Picture #3)

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Caren Krutsinger April 3, 2021 at 10:20 PM It is OBVIOUSLY the dress! Smirk. Smirk.

Jennifer Proxenos April 3, 2021 at 12:40 PM Enjoyed your Tableau my friend - congratulations on your win. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Eve Roper March 31, 2021 at 9:55 PM Great imagery, Andrea, congratulation on you win. Have a blessed Easter. Hugs Eve

Kim Merryman March 31, 2021 at 3:22 PM Andrea, I like how you did this from the girl-friend's point of view. Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Joseph May March 31, 2021 at 5:33 AM Congrats on your win Andrea, Very nicely done

Marilene Evans March 29, 2021 at 5:44 PM The red dress says it all. Too bad, its not my favorite color. So is the red car, they attract the cops and it is the most ticketed car. So slow down. LOL!

Anitha Jayasankar March 29, 2021 at 9:34 AM Good idea for the chosen picture Andrea... Maybe red color attracts more... Haha... Best wishes in the contest dear.... Hugs.. ~ Ani

Jan Allison March 29, 2021 at 7:45 AM lol I chose the same pic, love your interpretation of ladyyy in redddd:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen March 29, 2021 at 7:00 AM - It must be the red dress :))) - Great written, Andrea :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit March 29, 2021 at 5:43 AM Excellent capture, Andrea--that is what I see in the photo.

Tom Cunningham March 29, 2021 at 1:44 AM He can always dream, but so can she. Tom

Victor Buhagiar March 28, 2021 at 10:58 PM Does a red dress make anyone better? Too many flirts around.

Alexis Y. March 28, 2021 at 8:32 PM Hi Andrea, This is a good interpretation of the picture from the girl holding the guy's hand perspective. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great evening, my friend:-) Alexis

Susan Woodrow March 28, 2021 at 8:21 PM I wondered who’d notice the gals look alike lol you’re right about it being the red (it could be a top too just like the pale blue one the other is wearing!) as the eye catching difference :)

L Milton Hankins March 28, 2021 at 8:08 PM Good luck in the contest, Andrea. I choose the same picture you did--my bad!!!

Unseeking Seeker March 28, 2021 at 6:48 PM wishful thinking! ;) good luck for the contest, Andrea

Sotto Poet March 28, 2021 at 5:24 PM Excellent imagination in this imagery; the red dress is more attractive than the gal Warm Hugs Andrea