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My guy turns to stare at a gal like me - slim with long brown hair Why might he obsess? It has to be the sexy cute red dress! March 28, 2021 For Joseph May's Tableau 2 Poetry Contest (Picture #3)

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/3/2021 10:20:00 PM

It is OBVIOUSLY the dress! Smirk. Smirk.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/3/2021 12:40:00 PM

Enjoyed your Tableau my friend - congratulations on your win. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/31/2021 9:55:00 PM

Great imagery, Andrea, congratulation on you win. Have a blessed Easter. Hugs Eve

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/31/2021 3:22:00 PM

Andrea, I like how you did this from the girl-friend's point of view. Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Joseph May

Date: 3/31/2021 5:33:00 AM

Congrats on your win Andrea, Very nicely done

Marilene Evans

Date: 3/29/2021 5:44:00 PM

The red dress says it all. Too bad, its not my favorite color. So is the red car, they attract the cops and it is the most ticketed car. So slow down. LOL!

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 3/29/2021 9:34:00 AM

Good idea for the chosen picture Andrea... Maybe red color attracts more... Haha... Best wishes in the contest dear.... Hugs.. ~ Ani

Jan Allison

Date: 3/29/2021 7:45:00 AM

lol I chose the same pic, love your interpretation of ladyyy in redddd:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/29/2021 7:00:00 AM

- It must be the red dress :))) - Great written, Andrea :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/29/2021 5:43:00 AM

Excellent capture, Andrea--that is what I see in the photo.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/29/2021 1:44:00 AM

He can always dream, but so can she. Tom

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/28/2021 10:58:00 PM

Does a red dress make anyone better? Too many flirts around.

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/28/2021 8:32:00 PM

Hi Andrea, This is a good interpretation of the picture from the girl holding the guy's hand perspective. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great evening, my friend:-) Alexis

Susan Woodrow

Date: 3/28/2021 8:21:00 PM

I wondered who’d notice the gals look alike lol you’re right about it being the red (it could be a top too just like the pale blue one the other is wearing!) as the eye catching difference :)

L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/28/2021 8:08:00 PM

Good luck in the contest, Andrea. I choose the same picture you did--my bad!!!

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 3/28/2021 6:48:00 PM

wishful thinking! ;) good luck for the contest, Andrea

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/28/2021 5:24:00 PM

Excellent imagination in this imagery; the red dress is more attractive than the gal Warm Hugs Andrea