G a D My Persona Hell

G.A.D (my personal hell)



Life


           is 

                    such

                           
                                a


                                       beautiful
                                                     

                                                            gift


                                                                               sealed

 
                                                                   in


                                                      a


                                          bottle


                                    of



                   poison.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Adams Avatar
April 1, 2015 at 11:25 AM
A nice effort toward a concrete (shaped) poem, Feo. I've done a few myself. Not as easy as it looks.
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November 5, 2014 at 5:53 PM
I love the way you have crafted this poem:-) Hugs jan xx
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