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glint in your eyes stars ashamed glittered my soul soon alarmed gone like a breeze sweat returned gory dreams savoured alone

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 12/10/2015 1:06:00 PM

???? nothing to say... amazing

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/9/2015 9:16:00 PM

I see this is alliteration. Very nice. You should put alliteration for the form!

Francis Osho
Date: 12/9/2015 10:42:00 PM

thanks andrea. i know it is alliteration. but i dont like poems labelled. thats why. i am sorry

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/9/2015 2:47:00 PM

Love this ...

Francis Osho
Date: 12/9/2015 6:11:00 PM

thanks charms.was wondering what happened to you.this is from the past. i had a whole chapter in ny book like this alliteration with meaning titled " song of love" all the w,r,m,s taken from thsat