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Futuristic Shirt

One sewed by ambitious hands Of a once ten year old During a homescience class For her daughter one day One sewed by ambitious hands Njeri August 4th 2015 A PRIZED REFRAIN A shirt

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Ian Jones

Date: 8/5/2015 11:16:00 AM

The repetition illustrates the continuity of life. As a grandmother also to sew for grandchild and teach the other generations to do the same. Also the change of emphasis fro one generation to the next but the same phrasiology with different dreams. Kind regards, Ian

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 8/6/2015 8:08:00 AM

Good observation! I like that. Thank you Ian.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 8/5/2015 2:44:00 AM

Njeri the refrain quite tinge with sadness.. nice write? luck in the contest!~Olive Eloisa

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 8/6/2015 8:06:00 AM

Thank you Olive. Maybe the sadness is due to the uncertainty of the future???