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Futuristic and Medieval

I'm having some thoughts of the past. Nobody has woken up amid night. The seagulls replied with a steep scream. Utterly hidden below heaps of stream. Remembrances of a sad state of mind. He was injured due to the singular of time. On the verge of a social upheaval wind. The agony of previous reviews of crime. The action is still fresh in my memory.   Everlasting life is a state that is eternal. That particular epoch has faded away. The imply of a louder voice is not essential. Do not squander time scouring for each other. Springtime is one of their favorite seasons. Please enable them to return to home forever? And scents the delightful Michelangelo creations! But things usually happen when I'm away. Loneliness is all around me everywhere. It pains me to reckon of the trips we had jointly. The distance between the two places is prairie hare. Is there anyone who can examine the mind? I feel at ease as my pulse begins to slow. A once-all-powerful genie who lost his aptitude Servitude under rule through force of law! We drew a picture of a dream. We've all adopted an updated identity. When will the sun bright again, for a fresh gleam? Plants become sensory with time and worry.
Written: July 20, 2021 A BRIAN STRAND JULY 22 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Stand
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Chapin Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 7:40 PM
Lasaad, Interesting! I love this poem; you wrote an excellent piece. ~~Kind Regards, Jayme
Skelly Avatar
July 21, 2021 at 10:59 PM
Quote:We drew a picture of a dream. We've all adopted an updated identity.... As we grow older and mature our image shifts this line perfectly illustrates how we evolve. Very nice thought to close the poem with....Delice
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July 22, 2021 at 3:17 AM
Thank you so much Delice your sweet words are always so uplifting to me, have a wonderful day
Hankins Avatar
July 21, 2021 at 8:19 AM
As I was reading your plethora of memories and images, I was thinking how we poets draw pictures "of a dream." Interesting stuff, Lasaad.
Poet Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 3:20 AM
Thank you so much Milton, sometimes I have the same feelings but in end that’s why we are poets because we have à developed 6th sense that can grasp just some more details and expand them to bring a nice picture about the seen.
Buhagiar Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 11:25 PM
So many images, some contrasts that are great. A well-written poem.
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July 21, 2021 at 6:45 AM
Thanks Victor, your comment is so uplifting, appreciate it, have a great day
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