Furrowed Brows

Furrowed Brows


My mind, a cornucopia of ripening words.

Idle thoughts hanging loose
pollinated by the muse

Temptation’s beauty
dances on the winds of change
an audience of one.


©11/3/2017

submitted to – CORNUCOPIA – Poetry contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 11/26/2017 12:59:00 AM
wow, John, this is quite striking! SO few lines and truly one of the best I have seen. Congrats!
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Date: 11/25/2017 6:07:00 PM
Three forms incorporated seamlessly... Bravo!. Congratulations on your top wIn!
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Date: 11/25/2017 2:56:00 PM
I enjoyed the original take on this theme, John...my type of poetry. Congratulations on placing first. Regards // paul
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Date: 11/25/2017 1:36:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats John I love the theme you used:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/25/2017 1:17:00 PM
John,congratulations on your win with this beautifully written poem. Excellent! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/25/2017 4:35:00 AM
A very interesting interpretation of the theme, deep, yet short and simple. I like the 1, 2, 3 line stanzas, well done John.
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Date: 11/24/2017 11:03:00 PM
Congrats, John on placing 1st! A cornucopia filled with ripening words...
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Date: 11/3/2017 8:30:00 AM
What a wonderful way to describe poetry John, i especially love the final poem!:-) hugs jan xx
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