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Furrowed Brows

Furrowed Brows My mind, a cornucopia of ripening words. Idle thoughts hanging loose pollinated by the muse Temptation’s beauty dances on the winds of change an audience of one. ©11/3/2017 submitted to – CORNUCOPIA – Poetry contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/26/2017 12:59:00 AM

wow, John, this is quite striking! SO few lines and truly one of the best I have seen. Congrats!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/25/2017 6:07:00 PM

Three forms incorporated seamlessly... Bravo!. Congratulations on your top wIn!

Paul Callus

Date: 11/25/2017 2:56:00 PM

I enjoyed the original take on this theme, John...my type of poetry. Congratulations on placing first. Regards // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 11/25/2017 1:36:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats John I love the theme you used:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 11/25/2017 1:17:00 PM

John,congratulations on your win with this beautifully written poem. Excellent! Hugs Eve ~`*

James Inman

Date: 11/25/2017 4:35:00 AM

A very interesting interpretation of the theme, deep, yet short and simple. I like the 1, 2, 3 line stanzas, well done John.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/24/2017 11:03:00 PM

Congrats, John on placing 1st! A cornucopia filled with ripening words...

Jan Allison

Date: 11/3/2017 8:30:00 AM

What a wonderful way to describe poetry John, i especially love the final poem!:-) hugs jan xx