John Lawless Poet I do not know?

Furrowed Brows

Furrowed Brows


My mind, a cornucopia of ripening words.

Idle thoughts hanging loose
pollinated by the muse

Temptation’s beauty
dances on the winds of change
an audience of one.


©11/3/2017

submitted to – CORNUCOPIA – Poetry contest

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Andrea Dietrich November 26, 2017 at 12:59 AM wow, John, this is quite striking! SO few lines and truly one of the best I have seen. Congrats!

Connie Marcum Wong November 25, 2017 at 6:07 PM Three forms incorporated seamlessly... Bravo!. Congratulations on your top wIn!

Paul Callus November 25, 2017 at 2:56 PM I enjoyed the original take on this theme, John...my type of poetry. Congratulations on placing first. Regards // paul

Jan Allison November 25, 2017 at 1:36 PM Dropping back with my congrats John I love the theme you used:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper November 25, 2017 at 1:17 PM John,congratulations on your win with this beautifully written poem. Excellent! Hugs Eve ~`*

James Inman November 25, 2017 at 4:35 AM A very interesting interpretation of the theme, deep, yet short and simple. I like the 1, 2, 3 line stanzas, well done John.

Kim Rodrigues November 24, 2017 at 11:03 PM Congrats, John on placing 1st! A cornucopia filled with ripening words...

Jan Allison November 3, 2017 at 8:30 AM What a wonderful way to describe poetry John, i especially love the final poem!:-) hugs jan xx