Furrowed Brow

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The mystery is what has the

brow furrowed?

'Pon my brow furrowed lines of great care Out on the porch in torment went Pain and agony of soul Refreshed now with morn's cold Peace, tranquility Flows 'or me for Creation's Blessings See

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Jack Horne

Date: 2/15/2012 1:36:00 PM

Another gem about your porch, Sara - I love to picture you in your favourite place having suchg deep thoughts

Dalila Agtani

Date: 2/13/2012 12:49:00 AM

A nice Nonet Sara. Next to my graying hair might be a furrowed brow. I enjoyed reading this tonight. Thanks for inspiring me to write more with your positive comments. Love Dalila

James Marshall Goff

Date: 2/11/2012 5:13:00 PM

story of recovery.....nice again! jimbo

Deck Fitzgerald

Date: 2/11/2012 2:04:00 PM

Enjoyed this Sara even sat here and furrowed my own brow lol , Hugs and best wishes , Declan xx

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/11/2012 12:12:00 PM

This is a wonderful write of yours that I read this afternoon! I love the "...Peace, tranquility..." perfect line for the poem! I enjoyed reading the write today Sara! You are great at writing these Nonets! Keep 'em coming! Awesome Work!!