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Funereal

Come with me o thee, to my grave and reach, for my ecstasy deceased, take my eyes and see, my ashes and feel, gravity of my soul and preach, kindness and passion meet, your greatness my plea, blind me light come walk with me, alter me please, destroy the devil in me, carry me angel, fly with me, away to infinity, discover uncharted horizons and feel, restless in the vastness you reel, burn me fire, melt with me, vaporize veins, surprise me, zero me radiance, die with me, fade away shining star....shine in me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/11/2010 11:17:00 AM
Congrats on being featured! Rhonda Hero
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Date: 7/9/2010 12:12:00 PM
This is a very unique poem and it flows so well. It reminds me of the ballad poem, "The Unquiet Grave." This is quite imaginative and sends an excellent message of facing the beyond. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 7/6/2010 3:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Rinki. May you have many more features. Love,Carol
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Date: 7/5/2010 11:24:00 AM
Congrats Rinki on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great choice to share with us all.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA
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Date: 7/5/2010 11:00:00 AM
Congrats Rik, on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup homepage this week, you are such a great talent! keep up the great writes, and enjoy the honor. Love, Adeleke
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Date: 7/5/2010 7:32:00 AM
Many congrats on your wonderful feature this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 7/1/2010 12:46:00 PM
Well done Rinki, nice and deep enjoyed the way the poem stars off strong.. I also loved the way the poem ended with words of charm,, have a nice one,..Sidney LeeAnn
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Date: 7/1/2010 11:51:00 AM
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Date: 6/30/2010 5:06:00 PM
sounds passionate!
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Date: 6/30/2010 4:31:00 PM
My soup mail got crossed up somehow.. it was going to Tirzah Conway but in the middle of the message it went out into cyberland.. sorry about that.. have a new celll phone with internet on it and am just getting used to all the facets of it.. appreciate u letting me know... with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii...on vacation..
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Date: 6/30/2010 4:19:00 PM
THIS IS A DEEP WRITE WITH RADIENCE UPON IT'S WORDS, LOVED YOUR WRITE.-SKAT
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