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funeral song


her lips quiver
without making a sound...
funeral song



© kashinath karmakar 2012
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Placement:1st ;(March 2012)

Contest:Strictly a Stickler for Strictness (haiku)

Sponsor:Charles Henderson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/17/2012 12:00:00 PM
A gem beyond doubt. Congrats on your well deserving win my friend. Great concept. Ravindra
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Date: 3/17/2012 3:33:00 PM
Excellence in haiku once again! Congrats. Gwendolen
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Date: 3/15/2012 8:54:00 PM
Again, Kash, BIG Congratulations for one of your best haiku ever(now you can't use it for at least three months. heehee) Luv, Andrea
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Date: 3/15/2012 4:00:00 PM
I was such a child perhaps I am still...Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 3/15/2012 2:07:00 PM
Once again.....so well deserved, in this brief, but emotional winning poem!! Congratulations to you Kash!!
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Date: 3/15/2012 1:52:00 PM
congrats Kash on a brilliant win for quality lines of poetic art luv.. this one is ultra smooth and intense..
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Date: 3/15/2012 1:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your super win in Brian's "Bakers Dozen" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/13/2012 12:28:00 PM
sad so sad! Congrad's on your win!
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Date: 3/12/2012 7:55:00 PM
Excellent haiku, Kash. Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/12/2012 8:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Charles' "Strictly" contest Kash. Love,Carol
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Date: 3/11/2012 6:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win in this haiku contest,Kash.awesome write....Kudos to you...
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Date: 3/11/2012 5:59:00 PM
Big congrats on your well deserved win, Kashinath. Now it's time for me to get out of here!!!
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Date: 3/11/2012 12:05:00 PM
Congrats on your first win, kash! I knew this one was going to be a winner...love it. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 3/11/2012 9:32:00 AM
Wow....terrific poem, Kash!!! And I almost missed seeing this one! You deserve this 1st place win! (such grief expressed in so few words!) Congratulations!
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Date: 3/11/2012 9:24:00 AM
i knew this would rate high, kashi.. a fav, fav!.., hurrah for the BIG-TIME win..:) huggs
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Date: 3/11/2012 7:53:00 AM
Congratulations Kash a lovely piece xx
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Date: 3/11/2012 12:50:00 AM
congrats Jash on a perfect first place win luv with these awessome lines luv..
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Date: 3/7/2012 7:39:00 AM
Beautiful. Very well expressed. Always, Laura
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Date: 3/2/2012 6:05:00 PM
You write some great Haiku's Kashi, your endings always wrap the thought up with style.
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Date: 3/2/2012 11:01:00 AM
yes, it was Callie!! You know well!!
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Date: 3/2/2012 9:27:00 AM
are you there??... advice if any for that contest... got a new one and slept only for 4 hours!....zzzz..)huggs!
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Date: 3/2/2012 8:32:00 AM
high impact poetry Kash and a stunning visual luv.. quite awesome ..
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Date: 3/1/2012 10:16:00 PM
A brilliant haiku. I can see why funeral would be a kigo. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 3/1/2012 8:41:00 PM
this is so apt Kash! a beautiful new horizon for singing. thank you for welcoming back on the soup ;)
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Date: 3/1/2012 6:02:00 PM
A very nice one, Kashinath. Is any kigo reference considered seasonal then? You always come up with good haiku examples!
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