Kash Poet Poet Haiku

Funeral Song

her lips quiver
without making a sound...
funeral song



© kashinath karmakar 2012
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Placement:1st ;(March 2012)

Contest:Strictly a Stickler for Strictness (haiku)

Sponsor:Charles Henderson

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Ravindra K Kapoor May 17, 2012 at 12:00 PM A gem beyond doubt. Congrats on your well deserving win my friend. Great concept. Ravindra

Gwendolen Song March 17, 2012 at 3:33 PM Excellence in haiku once again! Congrats. Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich March 15, 2012 at 8:54 PM Again, Kash, BIG Congratulations for one of your best haiku ever(now you can't use it for at least three months. heehee) Luv, Andrea

Debbie Guzzi March 15, 2012 at 4:00 PM I was such a child perhaps I am still...Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Carrie Richards March 15, 2012 at 2:07 PM Once again.....so well deserved, in this brief, but emotional winning poem!! Congratulations to you Kash!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 15, 2012 at 1:52 PM congrats Kash on a brilliant win for quality lines of poetic art luv.. this one is ultra smooth and intense..

Carol Sunshine Brown March 15, 2012 at 1:01 PM Congratulations on your super win in Brian's "Bakers Dozen" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi March 13, 2012 at 12:28 PM sad so sad! Congrad's on your win!

Kim Merryman March 12, 2012 at 7:55 PM Excellent haiku, Kash. Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown March 12, 2012 at 8:30 AM Congratulations on your win in Charles' "Strictly" contest Kash. Love,Carol

Olusegun Arowolo March 11, 2012 at 6:04 PM Congratulations on your 1st place win in this haiku contest,Kash.awesome write....Kudos to you...

Andrea Dietrich March 11, 2012 at 5:59 PM Big congrats on your well deserved win, Kashinath. Now it's time for me to get out of here!!!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 11, 2012 at 12:05 PM Congrats on your first win, kash! I knew this one was going to be a winner...love it. Blessings, Rhonda

Carrie Richards March 11, 2012 at 9:32 AM Wow....terrific poem, Kash!!! And I almost missed seeing this one! You deserve this 1st place win! (such grief expressed in so few words!) Congratulations!

Nette Onclaud March 11, 2012 at 9:24 AM i knew this would rate high, kashi.. a fav, fav!.., hurrah for the BIG-TIME win..:) huggs

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 11, 2012 at 7:53 AM Congratulations Kash a lovely piece xx

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 11, 2012 at 12:50 AM congrats Jash on a perfect first place win luv with these awessome lines luv..

Laura Breidenthal March 7, 2012 at 7:39 AM Beautiful. Very well expressed. Always, Laura

Elizabeth Wesley March 2, 2012 at 6:05 PM You write some great Haiku's Kashi, your endings always wrap the thought up with style.

Andrea Dietrich March 2, 2012 at 11:01 AM yes, it was Callie!! You know well!!

Nette Onclaud March 2, 2012 at 9:27 AM are you there??... advice if any for that contest... got a new one and slept only for 4 hours!....zzzz..)huggs!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 2, 2012 at 8:32 AM high impact poetry Kash and a stunning visual luv.. quite awesome ..

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 1, 2012 at 10:16 PM A brilliant haiku. I can see why funeral would be a kigo. Blessings, Rhonda

M.I.A . March 1, 2012 at 8:41 PM this is so apt Kash! a beautiful new horizon for singing. thank you for welcoming back on the soup ;)

Andrea Dietrich March 1, 2012 at 6:02 PM A very nice one, Kashinath. Is any kigo reference considered seasonal then? You always come up with good haiku examples!

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