Funeral Song

her lips quiver without making a sound... funeral song © kashinath karmakar 2012 ==================== Placement:1st ;(March 2012) Contest:Strictly a Stickler for Strictness (haiku) Sponsor:Charles Henderson

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Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 5/17/2012 12:00:00 PM

A gem beyond doubt. Congrats on your well deserving win my friend. Great concept. Ravindra

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/17/2012 3:33:00 PM

Excellence in haiku once again! Congrats. Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2012 8:54:00 PM

Again, Kash, BIG Congratulations for one of your best haiku ever(now you can't use it for at least three months. heehee) Luv, Andrea

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/15/2012 4:00:00 PM

I was such a child perhaps I am still...Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/15/2012 2:07:00 PM

Once again.....so well deserved, in this brief, but emotional winning poem!! Congratulations to you Kash!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/15/2012 1:52:00 PM

congrats Kash on a brilliant win for quality lines of poetic art luv.. this one is ultra smooth and intense..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/15/2012 1:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your super win in Brian's "Bakers Dozen" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/13/2012 12:28:00 PM

sad so sad! Congrad's on your win!

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/12/2012 7:55:00 PM

Excellent haiku, Kash. Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/12/2012 8:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Charles' "Strictly" contest Kash. Love,Carol

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 3/11/2012 6:04:00 PM

Congratulations on your 1st place win in this haiku contest,Kash.awesome write....Kudos to you...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/11/2012 5:59:00 PM

Big congrats on your well deserved win, Kashinath. Now it's time for me to get out of here!!!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/11/2012 12:05:00 PM

Congrats on your first win, kash! I knew this one was going to be a winner...love it. Blessings, Rhonda

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/11/2012 9:32:00 AM

Wow....terrific poem, Kash!!! And I almost missed seeing this one! You deserve this 1st place win! (such grief expressed in so few words!) Congratulations!